|Reviews for Perfect way to end the day!|
| Valtira chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Actually I loved it. You painted a wonderful picture of each scene. Very descriptive. I got a superb feel for their anger, their pain and even the twinge of fear. The best or maybe the worst part was the dark hunger. Loved it - I don't usually read one shots, not enough meat for me, but the scene you pictured was very realistic. Thanks - and you can't stop now - LOL
| I'mcalledZorro chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Good story, very cute!
| wren chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
I think you sell yourself short-you definatly can write! I hope to see more!