Reviews for Heartache
StitcherBell chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
I don't know if the medical parts are right or not either, but I do know this is a beautiful story and You got the emotions wonderfully. Wow. I love it.
British Chaos chapter 1 . 10/21/2014
It's not nice to make a reader cry :'D
Just kidding. That was so beautiful I'm actually crying! Not the fangirl 'the feels, I'm crying!' I've physically got tears in my eyes.
Holy cow I loved that!
baturtlesab1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2014
Oh geeze.

Does anyone have a tissue?

Or a box of them?

baturtlesab1
eldarsevenstar chapter 1 . 6/30/2013
This... was great. Incredibly sad, but great. Loved it! Instant fave.
GirlforGod99 chapter 1 . 4/17/2013
You killed Leo?! WHAT!? I was very much enjoying the story until you killed Leo.
Crazymelody chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
:( u made Leo die! How could u do that! Well even though Leo died ahem this was a great story . Hope u write more

-Rachel
tmntlover2013 chapter 1 . 5/18/2011
Great job on the story I liked it alot, pooooooooor Lep (sobs) he is my first favorite turtle, keep up the great work and keep on writing.
SilentEliza chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
Absolutly amazing...

one of the few stories that acctually brought tears to my eyes It's not that I'm heartless or anything but I've read enough of the typical death/injured fics to expect what would happen and how everyone would react...

however, this story was quite original in the fact that this plot WAS somthing that is both unexpected and ironic.

Thank you for the excellent read
Happybubblex3 chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
no, Leo died! poor leo... even when he's gonna die he always thinks of his brothers first...

This is great fic! it's so sad...
Miss Fenway chapter 1 . 11/29/2008
Let me count the ways this fic made me cry. Okay on second thought it would take way too long.

Uh, Mikey being stron for Raph... Raph crying... and his speech at the funeral. Those were the biggies. :( Oh and reading it whilst listening to 'My Immortal' did NOT help.
midnightwolf2189 chapter 1 . 11/7/2008
That was such a sad story! I'm not usually one to cry over a fic, but this did the trick. Good job! (I think I cried twice as hard from listening to "Diem Ex Dei" by Globus while reading it.)
Rachel McN chapter 1 . 9/13/2008
you have me crying too. poor Leo, but he would think of his brothers as he died, wouldn't he, and poor Don having to perform the heart surgery on his dead and live brother...I need a tissue...
Mary Smitty chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Oh God, I cried so much reading this :'( Thank you, it was still so good story.
sambev89 chapter 1 . 9/23/2006
Oh, great job! That's so tragic, I love the poetic way you wrote it.
SaradocCraver101 chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
I love it and I'm crying.
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