Reviews for GeoPorn
CheeseDeluxe chapter 1 . 8/10/2011
Needs more depth in the characters. I know this is a oneoff, but Randy and Andy seem a bit shallow. Also, try to get your introductions in order. It's unprofessional and a bit stupid to introduce character names in parenthesis, let alone author notes. By the way, how did the announcer of the ship know that Randy and Andy were looking at smut? It seems unconnected.

Interesting concept, but poor execution. With a little work, though, this could be a very good oneshot. 6/10
Hopeisgrand chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
EXCELLANT , NOT BAD MORE NEEDS A BIT MORE FEEL INTO , MAKE SURE YOU HAVE LOTS OF PLOT AND CHARATER DEVELOPMENT INVOLVE HERE, MAKE NOTE OF THAT:)
tron50 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
wow i loved it just hilarius i never thought a good fic could come out of a game like this you are a vary funny creative person really why were you ashamed of this story
Captain in the Galley chapter 1 . 2/13/2007
Oh my god, that's a hilarious story. “emergency emergency!” A huge megaphone had suddenly come out of nowhere and started yelling at the boys; “All geolitians to the bridge immediately! We are under attack by meteo! And for god’s sake, Andy and Randy, get off the fucking porn!” I laughed so hard at that part. I kind of reminds me of when me and my perverted friends first looked at porn, a few years back. Funny stuff.

You spelled they as thay somewhere in there, but that's not really a big problem or anything. Awesome job.
SkylerOcon chapter 1 . 8/9/2006
Ge... you must be a real perv to think of something like that. What the hell goes on in your mind.

P.S. I was dared to look at this by my cousin. Being the king of dares I couldn't refuse
ClarinetWrathArineko chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Do not watch porn, or the Great Ugli Fruit Overlord will have your head!
Master Edge chapter 1 . 6/11/2006
OMG that's funny. Even though I don't know what the hell a 'Geolitan' is but whatever I never played it. Whats it for?

Any ways this is cool.

Bye
Angelas chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
hahaha... very funny! Well try to tell that to Ville! I love your funny story!