Reviews for Acts of Contrition
Venus3145 chapter 1 . 11/7/2019
Please continue
haifa chapter 1 . 12/9/2007
WHY DID YOU STOP UPDATING this is god please carry on
Meibou chapter 1 . 7/17/2006
wow, this is really good! sorry that this is a late review *sweat*

everyone's in character, and your writing's descriptive and flowy. nice job

update soon?

~Meibou
Sophia chapter 1 . 6/2/2006
wow. are you planning to continue this? because it's really good.
Blue-shine-angel chapter 1 . 5/20/2006
Please update soon!
xXxjustagrlxXx chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Um...is...this...a Hinata-chan x Sasuke-kun story? I...am...just...curious.
W6452 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
o0o...
blackrosevirus chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
love the story so far! update soon!
kiddtris chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
I really likde it. Good intro...it really introduces how Hinata is really feeling and how much she has grown up and changed.
naash chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
wow..i love this story...truly different.
kenshinlover2002 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
I liked it.

I have to admit at times when Hinta was speaking I was like 'What did she say?' But it's ok, I sort of got it after reading it a couple of times.

It's really good, update soon.
juliagulia1017 chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
you really tugged at my heartstrings with the mention of hinata's mother's last words... "forever is never but this moment of our lives..."

i love this first chapter. i love this father-daughter dialogue. i admire you for keeping hiashi and hinata in character. i really can't wait to read your upcoming chapters and i wish you the best of luck (though i don't think you'll need it... this story shows so much promise already)~!
YWYLloveSG chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
It was never a boring story to me. Hinata is soo strong in this story :p but even more shocking to me was how it seems like u r pairing Hinata up with Sasuke, ne? But her companion will be Sasuke... eh?

Keep on writing!
Purple1 chapter 1 . 4/20/2006
Sounds good, this chapter was a little boreing, but thats to be expected. You have to start the story somwhere, eh?