Reviews for Those Lacking Spines
Winter-Grown-Lily chapter 13 . 7/14/2011
There are some stories on FFNet. Good ones and bad ones.

Yours fit into hilariously funny while having a few morals.

It made me feel really good at the end. And in a 'I-have-read-an-awesome-story-and-will-be-gushing-over-it-for-a-LONG-time' way.
LockePhilote chapter 7 . 7/13/2011
That Spaceballs refference had me rolling around laughing. Everything else was pretty damn funny too. Im very glad TV Tropes led me here.
LockePhilote chapter 6 . 7/13/2011
Sigh... poor tunes. it saddens me how true this is.
LockePhilote chapter 5 . 7/13/2011
And I must laugh. That was absolutely wonderful. Cant recall having laughed harder at Larxene before. Great job.
LockePhilote chapter 4 . 7/13/2011
This story has the oddest and funniest refferences. Sanford and Son Hardware... well, that was a really good laugh.

Parody was very well done.
LockePhilote chapter 3 . 7/13/2011
I think I lost it when Pence started singing The Real Folk Blues. Gotta love Cowboy bebop refferences.

This is a very brilliantly written story. Last time I read a parody this good was Gulliver's Travels. Cant wait to read the rest. One small thing. I think Lexaeus has said "Oh, hell" about 5 times so far. Nice catchphrase of sorts, though I hope you dont overuse it later on.

Well, onward I go : )
Xekstrin chapter 5 . 7/12/2011
Larxene has always been my favorite, and this is why.
truthlieslovestars chapter 13 . 6/28/2011

Crackiest. Story. Ever.
GirlSemeRoxy0013XIII chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
GirlSemeRoxy0013XIII chapter 7 . 6/12/2011
XxPorcelainKnightXx chapter 5 . 6/12/2011
"The Organization never says die!"
Goonies, right? lol LOVE that movie.
XxPorcelainKnightXx chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
sakurasapprentice7 chapter 13 . 6/5/2011
Many fanfics I have come across in the past (espeicialy in KH)... They would end and I would think 'on to the next one' THIS one however isn't one to shrug off! Forever I shall be comparing the standard of writing with this fanfic

The humour, oh the humour! This was side-splittingly HILARIOUS! I found that at times I had to take a break to wipe away the tears I had from laughing so hard! In the present day it is hard to find something that literally makes you laugh out loud

I had never thought much of Xaldin, Vexen and Lexaeus before but after reading this I understand that they are as valuable as the other members of Organization XIII

I'll admit I'm a romance-buff and a supporter of AkuRoku and SoRiku yet I still wasn't insulted! You made it clear that for every idea their is a good way of doing it and a bad way of doing it which I have always thought... I seek fanfics that seem realistic in the KH sense, sure they don't have to be exact but you must follow thw invisible guidelines!

The plot (as crazy as it was) was brillient and simply genius in it's own right

I loved every chapter and I espeicially loved the glimpses we got of Axel, Larxene and the ukes... I enjoyed reading these long, detailed, and outstandingly funny chapters from beginning to end and I sincerely hope you continue writing as you have a gift that many KH fans can only dream of having!
Hijokugei chapter 7 . 6/3/2011
Hilarity has ensued, though I'm not sure if the "lets sit down and discuss the lesson we learned today" sessions are satirical or if you just write that way.
Hijokugei chapter 5 . 6/3/2011
Mah, the anviliciousness is a bit avilisious, woulda gone for a slightly less direct method, personally. I always liked symbolism and metaphor.
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