Reviews for Storm
Kelida Johnson chapter 1 . 2/10/2007
...

Wow.

That was an amazing story, the way it ended totally brought it all together!
Ujon Nocturne chapter 1 . 9/8/2006
fantastic way with the words.

the romance, imagery and humor in this fic is very nice.

the story was so sweet, so cute! i liked it a lot.

please, do update this.
Tahn chapter 1 . 8/14/2006
I love the imagery you do. I can picture her sitting in the rain with him. It's also got a touch of humor and I like that :) Good job :)
ImaPsychoSquirrel chapter 1 . 7/29/2006
Well, that was definitely fun to read.*sighs in sweet shippery happiness* And I could almost see something like this happening in the comic, although perhaps not the later part of your story (might be a little too mature and visual.) Still, I love how you have Varden just spilling out his feelings and being shocked that Lei'ella returns them. So cute!
FeatherWind chapter 1 . 6/21/2006
Sweet, I sure hope this happens in the comic!
Angel of Nevermore chapter 1 . 4/21/2006
Hah! You edited some stuff, the actual kiss is much smexier now.

(Ci da reviewer)