Reviews for Insomnia
The General G of K chapter 1 . 2/25/2009
*singsong voice* LOVE THIS!

I love the fact that Mal's insomnia seems to be brought up by all of his unresolved issues in his life, such as the horrors seen at Serenity Valley, and how Inara seems to haunt his every sense. What's even better is that I get the sense that Mal suffers from insomnia frequently, and it just adds so much heartfelt sorrow to the man, Mal Reynolds.

The interactions were lovely, and Mal's inner musings were in character. I also love the fact that Mal seems to be doomed to mess up every interaction or opening Inara presents to him. And his self-hate is not only realistically in character, but also painful to witness. But in a good way.

Loved this and cannot believe it only got two reviews.

The General
xfirefly9x chapter 1 . 12/10/2006
Aww! Those two can never get it right, can they!

Beautifully written. I love it!
canthereisto chapter 1 . 4/22/2006
aw so true! I adored that! So like them it's a little scary

Ava