|Reviews for The Deep|
| Soki-Chan the Great chapter 7 . 6/1/2006
*sobs* that, was so sad! i am a big lord of the rings fan so i loved the song that you put in. then i read the story, so now i'm sad. *crys some more, locks self in room*
Hiei: " sorry about that, she usually not this messed up.
| Mishirith chapter 7 . 5/29/2006
*sniffle* Poor Yugi...and everyone else. So it was like Yugi was the yami... Great story.
| DarkPhoenixIncarnate chapter 7 . 5/27/2006
OH MY GOD! THIS HAS TO BE ONE OF THE BEST YUGIOH FANFICTIONS EVER! I LOVE IT! FAVES LIST FOR SURE!
| Tabby chapter 7 . 5/27/2006
OO So-much-death! That was so sad. However, I loved the way you ended Yugi's life. ( Sorry Yugi! *Hugs him* ) But it's just what he said when he was dying. "They would have sided with me if I'd won." It's just so real and tragic. I loved the fact that you put in Golems song. It really did fit with everything. Even though it was a really sad ending, I liked how you ended it. It was true to the end and so realistic it's scary. So many people try to accomplish what you have and fail miserably. This was a beautifully poetic, tragic story. I look forward to 'Beneath the Surface'!
| xxx.Jenn.xxx chapter 7 . 5/27/2006
H'ohmigosh! That was just... -shivers- I'm still twitching, darnit. -twitchy twitchy- He KILLED 'Kurakins? Stupid meanie! -chases Yugi with a stick- (Yugi: RUN!) Muahaha! -squish- (Yugi: x.x)
That was just awesome. Although, somehow, I don't think it was as good as some of your other stories (this is entirely my opinion, neh) but maybe that's just 'cuz of poor widdle 'Kura. xD
I can't wait to see your new story! Yugi/'Kura? Should be... interesting... I've never seen it done before, so we'll just have to see what happens. -nods- Post it soon, alright? -fingers the stick threateningly- Good.
| Joey-lover chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
...aw! *cries* he died!
indago: if Kura thinks he can kick my ass...
omg that was such a sad ending!
Indago: _ stupid tomb robber...
...um..yami? you ok?
indago: -.- i will rip out his heart!
ook then...*backs away* erm, anyway! omg it was really sad! this was a great story! i loved it!
| Under Finger And Thumb chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
...you made me cry. *points* BAD FERRIS! YOU KILLED KURA! ;;_;; I'm sad now.
This was a great ending chapter, though I do love this story and wish it was longer. I can't wait for your new story though..
I AM ADDICTED TO YOUR WRITING! Nyeheheh! Now you shall have an entire army of reviewers to help you take over the world! *insane cackle* And we ask in response? Your stories and chapters! Mwuahah! Fair enough, I believe.
*grins* Well, I must go shower now, my mother is getting pissy. Bye-bye!
~Truly A Malfoy~
Under Finger And Thumb
(To freakin lazy to sign in. Nyeh.)
| Freedom Of Darkness chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
All the death. Wow. Its just. Wow. I really don't know what to say. It was exclent. I wanted to cry. Just. Wow. It was... Wow.
I just really dont know what to say. I was worried that the ending would let this story down but it didn't. You gave us the end with out leaving space for a sequal or leaving us going 'what the hell! That doesn't answer anything'. It was ended perfectly.
Very deep. Very emotional. Very Wow.
The definition of shocked awe would be this story.
Looking forward to the next story even though I'm not really a fan of BakuraxYugi but with the way you write I know it will be the best.
I think you are the best find in a long time and are much underapriciated.
| LBL chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
Fucking Love It! and thats all i can say
| Silver Mirror chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
No! *sobs* Yugi! Kura! My poor boys! But this chapter was so so awsome! This story was awsome! And you have another one coming as well! ooh! A Yugi/Kura fic! I won't ew it cause I've read a few with that paring! So I can't wait to read it!
| DolphinMoon11 chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
o_o...o...m...g! yugis dead yugis dead! *wails* um anyways this is a good story though it was sad. poor yugi porr kura. poor yami too cant imagine what hes going to go through..plus evil yugi was cool...weird but cool. welp good job on writing this!
p.s. aww tanks for da dedication i feel so loved...lol
| Spryte chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
T_T I'm still not really a Kura/Yugi fan but it's better than most of the fics I've seen of that pairing out there.
| Haiku Kitten chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
*sniffles* So sad! Poor Kura! Poor Ryou! Poor Yami! Poor Marik! Okay, I'm stopping now..
So, you're doing a Yugi/Bakura? Hmm, me wants to see how you do it. *nods*
| dragonlady222 chapter 7 . 5/26/2006
That was so sad. Three lives lost, for what started as jealousy and progressed on to hatred and mental illness at its worst. I hope your friens's story did not end quite as tragically. Good story.
| Freedom Of Darkness chapter 6 . 5/22/2006
Yay! My internet has stoped spazing and now I can review you! We are so near the end of the sory now and its sad! I always miss your stories when they end... Yugi still isnt hot enough to be this evil and its all going to end badly for him. Update again soon!