Reviews for The Deep
Soki-Chan the Great chapter 5 . 5/13/2006
hey there, i am totally in love with all of your stories! this one is just so depressing, it's awsome! i'm just lovig the Yugi gone bad thing here! keep up the amazing work, byezee!
Tabby chapter 5 . 5/12/2006
Uh-oh. It was only a matter of time before Yugi saw them, but still. Poor little Yugi. I liked how you made this chapter descriptive but not to so it takes over the whole chapter. There's just enough in there. Great job on this chapter. I loved the parts with Marik ( so sad ) and Yugi and Bakura. It's to bad there's only two chapters left...
tenamanda1988 chapter 5 . 5/10/2006
Aww! Alas poor malik. I wondered where he'd got too. Strange, I still find Ebil yugi cute, just not overbearingly so! XD
Moonie chapter 3 . 5/10/2006
I'm so sorry! I had no time at all to read your work, you've been posting like crazy, but i only get about 45 mins online a week! this is powerful stuff, keep going and don't think i've abandoned you! (scowls at so-called anti-virus software ;)
Strega chapter 5 . 5/10/2006
This story is just so edgy and Yugi really seething. I like it! (Thank you for not putting Yugi into an angsty rock band, making him write sappy 'I'm gone. I hope you are happy now!' notes, or becoming a vampire!) I like that Yugi is bent on revenge and is becoming a dark soul...without the goth make up and the usual trite crap most people write about. :D Go you!
Under Finger And Thumb chapter 5 . 5/10/2006
aw... Malik's dead... But it makes things more interesting. *grin* poor marik.

..What's ebiller?

*grabs bakura and gives him alcohol then drags him off.* Im going to take you home and make sure you eat and sleep and drink! And then you can corrupt Yugi when Ferris needs you. _
dragonlady222 chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
Yugi is feeling so betrayed by everyone and everything. I bet he's going back to Bakura's to reallylearn the occult now. He really hates Yami now. Mental illness is so awful. Yes, I know Bakura is a lost cause. He's an alcoholic and an occultist and can never be normal again. I still carry hope tough. Great chapter.
LBL chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
o dont stop dont stop! DONT STOP!

TTFN*mock salute*

LBL
Silver Mirror chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
Yugi only wishes he was evil! lol! But I really like this chapter! We even got some Marik in it! Yugi's on the move again! Bad Ryou and Yami! I really can't wait to read the next chapter!
Joey-lover chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
woosh damn! poor yugi, bakura just has to help him now! bakura has to help him turn evil...even though i think the last of his 'hope' is now gone. evil yugi and bakura...i do feel bad about marik though. i hope everything works out with him.
Spryte chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
*ish lost* So... what happened to Malik?

Is Yugi going to tell 'Kura that Yami's been molesting his hikari now? *ponders Bakura's reaction* Yami just seems to have the worst luck outside of the duelling/gaming arena, doesn't he?

Update soon
Mishirith chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
Woah, poor Yugi. And just when he was about to turn completely good again. I'm sure Yami and Ryou feel horrable (if they don't they should!) Well I hope you update soon! I kinda like reading about Yugi bein' all evil like that. Er...maybe that's not a good thing O.o
Haiku Kitten chapter 5 . 5/9/2006
Aww, poor Marik...

Baku, you're a drunk, get your act together and quit drinking vodka! *confiscates the vodka* Or at least share it with me! *takes a nice long swig*

Anywho, nother- *hiccup*- great chapter. *hiccup* Keep it up.I think I had to much of the vodka... *hiccup*
ScarletMoon chapter 4 . 5/6/2006
XD I loved it!

Go Yugi!

He's come out of the Light!

Yarr!

XD XD

I'd roll if he became the new er, shadow thinggie!

Yah! XD

I"m tired of this pathetic cute puppy eye i get bullied Yugi.

Give him guts! And lots of it! Guts and more guts!

XD I think you get the point.

I will be waiting!

O.o Or. I'll have to break out the...red...shiny..button of DOOM!
xxx.Jenn.xxx chapter 4 . 5/6/2006
HELLO FERRIS! I'm here again! -happy grin-

Wow. 'Kura's really screwed up, isn't he? Shame. -pats-

"Kneeling beside the form Yugi instantly was attacked by the overwhelming stench of stomach acid and beer." Do not ask me why, but I LOVED that sentance. Maybe it's 'cuz you used "attacked" and, well, you know. It's like 'Kura was attacked. And. Like. Uh. YESH! D

Hey, that's a good question. -blinks- Where IS Malik? Sies on me. I haven't even noticed he wasn't there. x]

Good point about small people. . I happen to be tall, but I have lotsa short friends. And they can really kick ass. -glances around nervously-

Recovery? Are you freaking INSANE! ('Kura: What, that's even a question?) -.- No. That shall never happen. -does a jig-

Love

Jenn
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