Reviews for A BIG Mistake
Dsman chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
his name is james those two actuly enjoyed it and want more
Daki92 chapter 1 . 9/13/2011
Intriguing
EnterpriseCV-6 chapter 1 . 10/21/2010
great story too bad .Possible didn't have a way to back up lighting (a fire or something like that) or a backup power supply at the time said power went out because then she would have seen what she and Ron were doing and then they would not have made-out with each other
womanaction chapter 1 . 2/8/2008
That made me LOL so hard...

Oh gosh, I could picture that...lol. Poor them...
Joe Stoppinghem chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
Flame nothing, this is a very good one shot.

Most enjoyable indeed.

Very good dialog, setup and descriptions.

Thanks
Second daughter of Eve chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
That was so funny! you don't ship those two right?

Eve
KimBeldeker chapter 1 . 12/15/2006
Very cool. i was reading this an laughting at the same time and my mother couldn't understand what was so funny. Anyway go work keep it. XD

-Kim Beldeker-
CastaS chapter 1 . 11/12/2006
great one, i enjoyed it.
kpfan203 chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
that was really funny!
daywalkr82 chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
All I could think while they were making out was "Oh, good God". Don't worry, though. It's a good thing.
Leah Phillips chapter 1 . 8/13/2006
Fantastic, I’m really beginning to enjoy reading fictions about these two, almost as much as I do reading about Shego & Ron. I loved this story, and its going in the faves. One thing i must ask though is, Are you going to write a sequel?

I hope you are.
TexasDad chapter 1 . 7/2/2006
Why would you think anyone would flame this? It was roll in the floor funny. "Ohh James..." "Ohh Kim..." see oh my god funny.

Tell you what, write a story about Kim's Mom and Ron, send it to MrDrP and tell him TexasDad knows he's in a rut with all the K/R stuff.

Funny story, too darn funny.
ScareGlow chapter 1 . 6/23/2006
Really nice! :D Very entertaining, very well written and a great idea! :)
Lonestarr chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
I feel sorry for anyone who would flame this terrific story. Nice use of "1985" and a clever conceit for the make-out session.
Aero Tendo chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Very funny! I especially liked how you set the mood for the adrenaline to be running either way. :)

I laughed SO hard when they started to kiss!

I laughed again at the end with those mirrored thoughts about how lucky they were!

Very funny story! Keep it up! :)
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