Reviews for There were no lies
Obliterator1519 chapter 4 . 1/10/2011
This story was goo but short and sad
Obliterator1519 chapter 4 . 1/10/2011
This story was goo but short and sad
Lullaby of the Doomed chapter 3 . 10/21/2010
THIS WAS A LONG CHAP. I SOBBED LIKE A BAY HOW DID SHE KILL THEIR BABY
XxTelinkxX chapter 4 . 8/12/2009
very touching and moving story, especially the ending, as a guy i dont cry often but the ending of this story brought a tear into my eye, good work

hope you continue to make more stories

connor
Texas Longhorn chapter 3 . 7/13/2009
Wow! That was definitely the saddest AAML fic I've read, but it was definitely worth it. It had action, suspense, and drama; all of the ingredients necessary for a good Pokeshipping story. I wish you'd write more, but I'm glad that you at least wrote this.
hydeandjackieforever20 chapter 3 . 7/6/2008
I've actually gone through a miscarriage before and I have to say that this story made me bawl my eyes out...but kinda in a good way cause your 5 step thing in the end made me realize that I kinda went through those steps too and that's how I got threw it. Anyways enough about me this story was well written and you should continue to write...especially AALM fics...maybe not so sad though. LOL
Snikers2010 chapter 3 . 6/25/2007
I loved it!

I cried...

That happened to me so I can relate...

Wonderful story!
InuRanma2007 chapter 1 . 6/19/2005
Hello, I read this fic at thepokemontower, i liked this story, true that its how teen life is now! This story really surprised me, now i know what not to do in the future, because this might have happened o_O! I also like the other stories! Keep up the great work! Also if this would have happend to me, i too would go crazy, after losing an unborn child!

I'M AGAINST ABORTIONS TIS MURDER! I hat to put that...
D.G. Ling chapter 3 . 5/5/2005
Pretty good so far.
NU chapter 4 . 10/11/2004
Wow that was really out of character. one they would never do that. two they are two responsible. three Brock would hve definitly talked to them orstopped them from doing it. not meant to flame just telling you the truth.
Nami chapter 1 . 6/30/2004
One word: AWESOME! SO AWESOME! I mean this is really like the real world out there and you did a wonderful job writing this. So realistic! Write more! More! More!
susuwatarispirits chapter 4 . 10/23/2003
The end of this story made me cry, it was great! Keep writing!
Sam chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
M, your stories are so good! They are a bit long, but... *goes to read the other fics* They're all really really good. I like the romance ones especially...

You have a real talent for writing. I hope to see even more fanfics written by you

*waits in front of computer anxious for more*
Hillside Dancing On chapter 4 . 5/10/2003
Omg...I've got tears in my eyes.

Since miscarried babies haven't seen the world or probably even grown brains and eyes yet, I don't really pity them. I know it sounds cruel. I think their souls are reincarnated and it's better for it to happen before they have something to lose.

It's worst for the parents. My mom miscarried and to this day I know I had a brother. Or sister. Or mutant genderless cyborg sibling.
fanficfan chapter 3 . 4/1/2003
this story tried to be many things, a little dramatic, but you wrote each part well. :)
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