Reviews for Intimate Touches
Don't be lazy.UniversityMiami chapter 1 . 4/8/2011
you spelled it wrong, I think it's supposed to be Kotetsu, It was good but put a little more foreplay into it. I'm looking forward to more Izumo and Kotetsu stories, there are hardly any, that couple is so underappreciated. I want to see a story with a little resistance. chapter 1 . 3/26/2011

sooooooo cute!

except its kotetsu not katetsu.
wolfofsummerbreeze chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
It's Kotetsu, not Katetsu. kOtetsu. I couldn't even read your fic cause it tore me out of the story every time I happened on it.
Ishamaru Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/5/2008
MapleLeaves-VodkaBottles chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
Don't worry, you did a GREAT job! Especially for your first sex scene!

RainxBow777 chapter 1 . 3/2/2008
Overall, I really did like the story, but you kept spelling Kotesu Kaketsu, so, just for the record, its Koketsu...

Great story though!
Draculas.Countess chapter 1 . 2/18/2008
This is really good.

i really enjoyed it.

the only thing i would suggest is that you go into more detail during the more sexual scenes.

other than that its really god.

you should write more

CrazyGirl05 chapter 1 . 1/22/2008
It's 'KOtetsu' not 'KAtetsu' _

Good work!
Neko TLC chapter 1 . 12/18/2007
Great story! i liked it a lot it was really cute! A little advise though, when it comes to anal sex lube is your friend, or else anal sex is very painful. Keep up the good work though.
TeenagersScareMe chapter 1 . 9/30/2007
great oneshot!

i hate to be the bearer of bad news... but I noticed that you spelled Kotetsu as "Katetsu" i just wanted you to know. and i can't wait to read more!
MysticFireBlood chapter 1 . 8/19/2007
All I have to say, that was hot!
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Zillah's Return chapter 1 . 4/8/2007
Lol, I was thinking "Hmm...maybe they should get a new apartment if their together" and then the last line said the same thing XD

Lovely Massacre chapter 1 . 3/7/2007
woow .. what a qreat fanfiq
Jester of Monochrome Dreams chapter 1 . 12/20/2006
OMG! kotetsu and Izumo are so hot together!

Gasp I've never wrote a sex scene so i'm pretty sure you did WAY better than i would have.

Omg..i just had an idea...

Kiba X Akamaru...

sorry. great fic _

keep it up with the yaoi!


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