|Reviews for Dreams Never Come True|
| Blairebear914 chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
Is the story over?, I saw that you wrote this story a year ago. I hope you update soon, I love this story. :)
| Neopuff chapter 1 . 12/7/2007
Was this gonna have more chapters...? I'd kinda like to know what happens next ;3;
Anyways, good story :D
| FanFictionFanatic chapter 1 . 1/29/2007
| MoonStarDutchess chapter 1 . 10/5/2006
Take this from a girl who has a bunch of frat boy friends. . .
It gives them more than just heartburn which makes me want to stay away from the house for a few days.
| Short Witty Name Goes Here chapter 1 . 7/26/2006
thats funny! and i dont think it gives you heartburn but hey im allergic to OJ so i hope you will update eventually even though its been what 4 months since you updated? well in anycase update whenever
| Selene Illusinia chapter 1 . 7/16/2006
are you going to continue this? It's good.
| ShadowDeviantPlayer chapter 1 . 7/7/2006
Omg! Great story,continue
Hm...OJ and burritos...I'm gonna try it on somebody
| Roy-Fan-33 chapter 1 . 6/13/2006
*chimpmunk laugh* Zomigod! That's great... Burritos and OJ... Roy would eat that too... I just know it! _
Well, I want to read the rest of this... So update for me... Kay?
| Cles chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Update! Please update! This fic had a great start! I want more!
| Jasmine Dawn Pendragon chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
Actually, it does give you heartburn! Brilliant story I might add! I hope you write another chapter/s shortly! I can't wait to read more!
| aizuhime chapter 1 . 4/24/2006
I've no idea if OJ and burritos give you heartburn either...but wow...you actually just came up with that idea?:P...So far, i'm liking it!Although the Maes hating Jenna part was a bit OOC...well...that's just my opinion...gaah...i'm blabbing again...anyways, i like the story!And i hope you'll update soon!Hayaku!;p/UPdate!
| Skavnema chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
this is funny!
| The New Fullmetal Alchemist chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
hey! i haven't actually finished reading yet but it looks good so far! I'm favining it so that it's easier for me to find when i get back from my dr.'s appt. - but i like it so far! keep it up! :)
| Han Ji Eun chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
I never thought of burritos and OJ in the morning causing heartburn, either...
Great chapter! More!
| Modest Truth chapter 1 . 4/23/2006
Omgosh! I love you! This is, lol, so awesome! And yes, burritos and oj do give you heartburn, especially if salsa is in the burrito... Lol Your story is so hilarious, it just rox! Riza's character is perfect for this. I'm glad Havoc, Fuery, and the others played a part as well. The time setting of this is good since the main characters don't have to worry about the outside complications that come from Ed and Al. I can't wait for another chapter. Update soon, please!