|Reviews for Harry's Boring Bookworm|
| Markus Ramikin chapter 2 . 4/9
"Are you guys happy now?" - Quite happy. Harry was foolish in the first chapter and paid for it - he should be happy the price was so low - but he seems to have learned better.
The only thing that I found a little off was the presence of the Minister of Magic. It lacks a sense of proportion. Sure, Harry Potter is a famous hero, and if he decided to call in some favors and bring the biggest official guns he could muster, I can perhaps imagine getting the head of the departament of law enforcement, whoever that is at the time of this story. But Minister... it's like having a President of a country find time to personally take part in a police surveilance operation.
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 2 . 2/1
The second chapter simply builds wonderfully on the first. I still say Ginny already had a cell in Azkaban waiting for her, but this just makes sure she never leaves. Of course, I imagine that Ian won't stay free for long either.
Very nice use of Hannah Abbott.
D. Page Robin
| The Ghostly Minion chapter 1 . 2/1
One of the first things that any reviewer needs to take into account is that this story was written before the publication of DH. I am also presuming that you've not revised the story since that book came out.
I commend you on how well you anticipated what acually occurred in that novel. The one major point you missed was the R&H relationship, which as a Harmonian, didn't bother me a bit.
You did a wonderful job in explicating Harry and Hermione's feelings toward each other. As far as I'm concerned, you've written pure canon, least up to midway into HBP. By having a a much longer Horcrux hunt, I think we can read between the lines and conclude that Ron and Hermione did figure out the shallowness of their 'attraction' and end it. More's the pity that Harry couldn't/didn't follow suit.
One thing I'm not certain about, dealing with the divorce. Shouldn't the fact that divorce is civil law mean that Harry could still bring criminal charges against Ginny over the curse? I'd think that, unless there is some sort of Statute of Limitations in effect, Harry has a hold over Ginny that should insure her good behavior.
H&H's marriage was a foregone conclusion. Her suggestion that there was a 'natural' method to test if the healing was successful is very cute.
A very well done chapter.
D. Page Robin
| Ice Demon Ranger chapter 2 . 7/12/2014
;P Good one.
| Moi chapter 2 . 7/9/2014
great chapter, lovely revenge
| Moi chapter 1 . 7/9/2014
lol, loved your story
| Ima Braxton chapter 2 . 5/24/2014
I love this! Amazing...
| Noble Korhedron chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Oh man, she must've really gone nuts! :-(
| Noble Korhedron chapter 1 . 7/22/2013
| Random number generator chapter 2 . 5/21/2013
Skipping trials? Again?
| Covante chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
Hinging her plan on Harry and Hermione's shared belief that they don't deseve good things and the other is too good for them/out of their league isn't the worst idea Ginny could come up with but her execution was rather lacklustre.
If Harry and Hermione communicate with each other at all after their polyjuice encounters then Ginny's entire plan just falls apart. At least she gave Harry a reason to doubt what he'd been seeing in his relationship with Hermione, Hermione though just saw her best friend of the last more than a decade act entirely out of character for himself and acting all obsessive and protective of Ginny in a manner which screams 'Love Potion!" As a healer she should be able to spot that easily enough, even allowing for the emotional trauma of the moment to be the reason she doesn't pick up on it right off she'd see it upon reflection and even though this is the wrong conclusion it would still roust her suspicions. So not only is it a fragile plan from Ginny but she overacted and removed any tenuous hold on the possibility of success her plan held.
| Covante chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
He lets her off light, really light. Hopefully she gets some just desserts in the second chapter and that's why she isn't mouldering away in the North Sea right now.
| turtlefan16 chapter 2 . 3/29/2013
That was nice and sweet.
| dadby chapter 2 . 5/10/2012
YOUR STORY IS FREAKING AWESOME! I LOVE IT! H/HR FOREVER!
| uwishuwerecool chapter 2 . 2/11/2012
well done very well written short n sweet