Reviews for The Dumbing Down Of Love
Eclipse1234 chapter 1 . 11/22/2013
it had promise.
Hylian Llink chapter 4 . 12/7/2012
Great! You're right, better late than never

When I read a few years ago you fic, before the TOS Dawn of the New World release. I wondered how it would end this story.

Nice fic and nice ending! keep on writing
SpiritlessRin chapter 4 . 8/3/2012
This was excellent. I'm pretty much speechless at this point. Ah, if I could hug you for every smile and emotion this story brought me, I'd be hugging you forever, lol. xD My suggestion: Keep on writing stories!
SpiritlessRin chapter 3 . 8/3/2012
As usual, this chapter is well put together. I liked it. But you should know that already :D
SpiritlessRin chapter 2 . 8/3/2012
I lovvveeeddd this chapter! It was great, great, great. Such a bitter yet sweet hint of romance in this chapter.
SpiritlessRin chapter 1 . 8/3/2012
I loved it. This was well put together. But for some odd reason, you make me want to punch "Derek" in the face. xD No idea why. I can tell I won't like him.
oh. god chapter 3 . 4/20/2008
a tearjerker.

who the hell IS Derek?

Dante's blade chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
wow that was a good and a strange style of shelloyd i never saw something like this keep it up please i cant wait for the next chapter XD
screamingedge chapter 3 . 7/23/2007
Whoa... sad. VERY sad.

TwT *murders Derek*
screamingedge chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
Now THIS is something that fills a genre that's sorely lacking in here- Love that's in secret, and how it's able to be regained.
OtakuRolePlayGamer chapter 1 . 7/3/2007
This is an incredible, incredible piece of work. I was so moved on the third chapter. So moved. I love the Shelloyd couplings, it [i]just[/i] works. Sheena/Lloyd; the main warriors wanting to reunite and save the worlds, Colette/Zelos; chosen by fate to bring peace to thier worlds, Genis/Presea; the kids of the adventure, and Raine/Regal; the mature adults.

I really like those pairings.

I just remembered that in the third chapter, it explains Adeline was born 7 months after the marriage, meaning...

Anyways, I'm just awed at your dramatic flair. I almost cried. I'm speechless and I'm babbling at the same time. Please, update this as fast as you can.
RedAnko chapter 3 . 6/25/2007
AAW! This chapter made me want to cry. ;.; But I LOVE IT! No discontinuing. Discontinue bad. Ugh, I'm a hypocrite now, I half-discontinued my story on another fanfic site... Um. Yeah. Don't make us wait too long!

Ark Navy chapter 3 . 6/21/2007
...OH-EM-EFF-GEE. You do not know how much-how badly-this is tempting my 'no cursing in anger' mantra... Just let me cool down for a while... Mrrph...

Honestly, that took me more than two hours to become level headed again. I guess that shows that you really do get back what you put into something, if not much more... Heh, you've taught me an important lesson. Thank you. I shall remember it whenever I think to twist the readers' arm.

I suppose the reason I was thrown 'into hysterics' is the first section of it. I was soo sure... and then not. XD But don't get me wrong on any of this: I L-O-V-E where you've taken this story and what you may come to do with it. And even in spite of the 'loss' (as I call it) Adeline being born seven months after their marriage-that just tickled me. X3

Speaking of the first section, you did amazingly to mask things the way you did. You've got such a great writing style and great mind alike. I just wish there were more people on this site that could appreciate it as much as it's worth: a LOT. But beggars can't be choosers, and it's all for fun and a few laughs, right? o;;

((::Mutters:: ...And a few broken arms, that's for sure...))
Andyman Incognito chapter 3 . 6/21/2007
Thank you so much for updating. I thought you had discontinued, but I guess i was wrong. Good thing, too.

I await the next (possibly last) chapter.

-Andyman Incognito
Andyman Incognito chapter 2 . 5/22/2007
They say you discontinued it...

Man, it was such a good story while it was going...

I REALLY wanted to know the ending
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