Reviews for Hinata's Little Black Book
LittleMaidel chapter 13 . 12/11/2016
Hinata is Awesome. I can so totally see this. I have the shivers in a good way.
mnementh2000 chapter 7 . 11/20/2016
Unfortunately, there are people who go through this type of torture, the same as Ino in this fic. And, like her, that blade often times appears to be the only way out. The truly tragic thing is, when that route is taken, the offending parent many times refuses to understand that they were the driving force that led to that unfortunate eventuality, blaming any- and everything but themselves. I have known girls in school who were deathly afraid of one parent or the other, but they kept the reasons and the fear hidden.
One girl stands out in particular, who feared her mom. I heard her talking with a friend of hers at one point, and she claimed her mother was a practicing witch (something that didn't surprise me, as we have many proclaimed wiccen in the area), but what did surprise me was her next statement. She said her mother would scry for her at various points throughout the day, watching what she did and with whom, and then if she didn't receive straight A's on her report card, would punish her severely. I could tell by her actions and her speech that she was truly in fear of her mother and what she would find out or do.
So, yeah, it's a sad fact of life that Ino's plight in this story is not as isolated or fictional as we all would like to think.
Alibi Nonsense chapter 2 . 5/4/2016
I love this idea. He wants the villagers to get headaches if they glare at him! I can just imagine the years old prank... XD
That old lady seems nice, though.
reydrago chapter 9 . 12/18/2015
wow this chapter is agreedable, considering what kakashi is looking like under his mask...
larryjc chapter 13 . 12/5/2015
At the end of the day, this story lacked head or tails.
It is just something written.
Dragon Blaze-X chapter 13 . 12/4/2015
...I can see that happing
Runadaemon chapter 13 . 10/15/2015
I was surprised there was plot! The first few chapters didn't seem to have any, so it surprised me when it suddenly all came together, but I like what you did with the place. I'd love to know what Orochi thinks about it. And yeah, he seems insane...
sbm chapter 13 . 7/10/2015
This chapter was freaking hilarious. Amazing.
Zyphrost chapter 13 . 6/29/2015



...What the hell did I just read?

Meh, creepy enough, weird enough and it did the trick.

But seriously, though. I'm pretty sure that there are only three ranks and the Hokage isn't one. The Hokage is more like a position. You can't just be promoted, you have to be elected, like president. I do know that it said something about how the Hokage was the highest position, but I think that was a sort of hierarchy thing. Like, clan head is a politically high position, but the person is still only considered a jounin/chuunin/genin in terms of shinobi rankings...

Pointless to remove it, no? Kage is an internationally required position, to be at an equal sitting with the other villages. Teuchi being foreign liason is fine, but Temari is also a foreign liason with Konoha...

Sorry if I got a little too canon-y. _;
RiverLG94 chapter 13 . 5/14/2015
Pickles in Orochimaru's office means one thing. He likes pickles. He eats them on his sandwiches that his bitch Kabuto prepares for him. Great one, though.
RiverLG94 chapter 12 . 5/14/2015
Anko's ending thought. That's all I have to say. ;)
Well, that and it was very emotional. Even in a story where you have a 12 year old girl take a village and recreate it under the use of violence and major mass murders, it's good to see that the people are still important.
RiverLG94 chapter 11 . 5/14/2015
No more rankings I get, but no more Hokage? That's Naruto's dream, to be Hokage. Only disappointing part of this chapter. The rest was beautifully scripted and it made me feel Hinata's outrage with the Hidden Leaf.
RiverLG94 chapter 10 . 5/14/2015
So she loves the demon more than Naruto himself? Interesting plot twist, though, interrupting the true timeline to make it that Sakura leaves without Naruto and Jiraiya. I think shit's about to hit the fan.
RiverLG94 chapter 9 . 5/14/2015
So that explains Kakashi's odd mask and his tardiness, not to mention his porno books. ; ) Done a great job so far. I'm digging it.
RiverLG94 chapter 8 . 5/13/2015
I am almost ready to cry because I wish this were the case in the real series! GO HINATA!
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