Reviews for HEARTLESS
sayuri2023 chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
I dunno, but for some reason I loved the lines:

Loveless is heartless to Beloved. Beloved... who is nothing but Loving to Loveless.

WoW!
Anon chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
Effin amazing.

Got me all hot and bothered.

D
Emerald Gaze chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
wow...just wow! that was great!_!
RKQS12 chapter 1 . 3/3/2007
Good story! :)
stardragon12 chapter 1 . 11/27/2006
You should have gone into more detail. Also they went too fast. It's like getting cake before you even asked for it. It never tastes as good when you don't beg or ask for it. If you want it enough then you get it you are pleased and excited. That's the feeling you want to get when reading a lemon. Just try to read over your lemon and see if you get that feeling...if not then you understand where I'm coming from.
BiNeko chapter 1 . 10/14/2006
Surprisingly arousing. O_o That's how it was. XD I loved it. It was awesome! Best lemon I've read in a while. Filled with emotion, I mean WOW! _
Sutsumi chapter 1 . 10/3/2006
That was kawaii~ But it was kind of short, and they didn't have any foreplay or anything ; Still, nice story, enjoyable to read. :)

On a random note... to the anonymous reviewer 'kayla'... LOL! I don't know if anyone else picked up the Kung Pow quote but I really laughed out loud there XD
Kei'sLoverXXX chapter 1 . 9/27/2006
Aww! Kawaii! That was sweet! I really liked how you made it non-dramatic. Usually people make it really dramatic during these scenes. i really liked it. Chu
MadxForxYaoi chapter 1 . 9/19/2006
*hugs you* that was the bomb! oh yes! soo sexy! yummy! you should make another one! *drools* you're a really great writer! *gives cookies*
GaaraloveXXX chapter 1 . 8/21/2006
how sweet! that was so touching. it was very beautiful. (I should be called either thoughtless or back-boneless) (cries)
LovexAndxEdelweiss chapter 1 . 7/21/2006
Nya~ You better do another chapter! Please? That was so good!
Le-Rain chapter 1 . 7/15/2006
Cute, and sweet. I'm favoriting this. x3
Mercury0Falling chapter 1 . 7/1/2006
yay hot.
setokaibalover25 chapter 1 . 6/27/2006
NO! RITSUKA-KUN'S ADORABLE EARS!... Oh well... Nice little story there! Bye! N'cha!
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