Reviews for Beach Paradise
CCLover43 chapter 4 . 1/20
Its not crappy...Its simply OOC are officially one of my favorite authors!
aria206 chapter 4 . 4/11/2014
Um...cool, kinda weird Sasuke and Sakura would do it with their friends there but yea...
\(0)/ hehehe
Guest chapter 4 . 12/23/2013
Nice really nice can't wait for your next story
KaGeRu chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
Crack? No.. Its crap.. The ending is weird you know.. Doing it inside the van in the broad daylight with your friends around is NOT enjoyable. Its like sharing your personal space to all..
KaGeRu chapter 3 . 5/20/2013
Its not that perverted yet. Trust me. I still consider this as innocent lemon...
Kiki 506556 chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
I think that it was fantastic I think you need to write more it is excellent actually think I think Naruto he's cute he's a loud mouth he got whiskers his baby blue eyes are pretty hianta is so shy. well back to you keep up the good work .
uchiha.sakura.23 chapter 4 . 10/15/2012
oh my .. nice
not-a-factor-of-lies chapter 4 . 7/5/2012
i like!
truthlieslovestars chapter 3 . 9/9/2010
HAAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH CRACK CRRACk fic... :)
naash chapter 4 . 6/26/2010
omg his is lol. sasuke is very um forward lol
MissPinoyz chapter 3 . 8/16/2009
Nice Job this is really good!
chocolatecoatedanimelover chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
It was good but a lot better if it was longer. XD
LunaxXmoongoddessXx chapter 4 . 4/29/2009
this was awesome, the ending wad too funny though.. i was laughing so hard... really i loved it... lmao
Vampire Saki chapter 3 . 4/5/2009
Haha I like this story! Oh and your not a sinner!Maybe your kind of a hentai but thats ok who isnt? Anyway nicee story!
kaysshi chapter 4 . 2/21/2009
WOW!
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