Reviews for Mary Sue's Revenge!
BindyKit chapter 13 . 11/19
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BindyKit chapter 2 . 11/19
thegenuineimitation chapter 12 . 12/15/2011
I have to say this is absolutely the best possible attack on rampant sue-dom I have ever seen! It points out all the frustration and cliche that come hand in hand with Mary-Sues and their counterparts and then it goes on to show what could be! How to fix it! For cripes sake it has humanity rather than just having all those girls die terrible horrible deaths without consequences!

All that aside it was enjoyable to read and I only lament the fact that suethors are generally too sensitive to percieved attacks on their character and those that start reading probably won't make it to the end of this fabulous piece before clicking the back button.

Great Work!
australis-angel chapter 13 . 5/12/2010
I got goosebumps from reading..that SueSlayer is evil! Sorry, but I picked one thing - numbweed is definitely brewed outside, away from human habitation. Maybe sleeping herbs? they could be brewed inside. Thanks for a great story!
australis-angel chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
Ch 1: I'm ROFL, you have very accurately described a few authors out there!
Diglossia chapter 13 . 1/29/2009
I would like to think that Mary Sue Smith did Impress a queen and did make it to Pern via the Bahrain, and that it was SueSlayer who lay in that room, madder than anything Lewis Carroll could envision. However, in all likelihood, the insane woman was both Mary Sue and SueSlayer, believing wildly inventive horrors were at her command, as well as the space/time continuum. Engaging.
Diglossia chapter 10 . 1/29/2009
I really like this! I'm sorry I'm not reviewing more but I keep wanting to read the next chapter so I end up clicking the next button instead of sending in a review. Very well done.
Diglossia chapter 5 . 1/29/2009
Wow. Very over the top but in a good way. Not something most people would have thought of.
Solen Kytel chapter 13 . 9/5/2008
I must say that your use of sues an sue-thors was amazing (so like many of those I see running around Gaia...) and the story in general was fun to read. Keep up the good work, and keep the parodies coming!
slashmarks chapter 13 . 7/10/2008
I hadn't noticed you finished this. Nice!

Wow... the epilogue was unexpected. I have another thought- maybe ot's SueSlayer in the room? I can imagine her laughing like that. Or maybe the code induces some form of hypnosis makling the people think they're in Pern.

ALso; I was quite surprised that Mary impressed gold- but she *is* a Sue, as I keep forgetting, so maybe I shouldn't have been surprised.


The Mad VAmpiress
truegold-dragonstar chapter 13 . 6/13/2008
Sorry. I'm an incorrigible happy endings girl. I'll stick with chapter 12, thanks. Not that chapter 13 is bad, but...

Anyway, thanks for writing this - it's been a real laugh, and I've enjoyed following along!

xdefunctaccountx chapter 13 . 6/11/2008
Cool! It's done! Not that I didn't like it. It's just nice to get to the end.

And you didn't even see all the possible interpretations of the ending. It could be SueSlayer! It could be... you, the author, convinced of the truthfullness of your own tale!

Anyway, cool. The last couple of chapters made a good ending.
GinnyStar chapter 13 . 6/10/2008
What a lot of twist and turns in your story I read all this time, try to follow your story line. But what a way to do it.

I hope your done with this kind of line for it made me shiver to I try to wirte this way.
Multi-Facets chapter 13 . 6/7/2008
(tilts head thoughtfully) Perhaps... Perhaps part of Mary ended on Pern, and the rest was consigned to madness. She went down, but I think SueSlayer might have gone with her.

That's the feeling I get, anyway.

Well played, astrokath. (applauds) As always, fine imagery, great grammar, spelling and punctuation, and a compelling read. Mary Sue was perhaps the most human out of everyone in the story. I'm glad you shared this with us. n_n
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