|Reviews for Napoleon the Ham|
| ElsaLuver chapter 1 . 2/28/2014
That was funny! LOL!
| Nightmare-belle chapter 1 . 2/28/2010
| HarvestMoon131 chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
This was a very funny story. I enjoyed it alot. You should make more.:))
| iloveromance chapter 1 . 1/14/2009
I liked this story and it was really funny. I was just watching this movie a little while ago, so I could picture Napoleon actually working at McDonald's. I agree that the "Long Sigh" comments could be eliminated and leave that up to the reader's imaginations.
I noticed that a few times you mentioned Rosemary and then put "we forgot to mention". This was a little confusing for me. I find it helpful that if I realize I've forgotten an idea, phrase or word to just edit the story and put it in a place that makes sense.
You've done a great job here and I'll keep checking back for more!
| AbbeyRay chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Love it.. Napoleon cracks me up. Please keep writing!
| chicken in the dark chapter 1 . 3/28/2008
I Loved your story
it felt like i was there
my favorite part was when you made napoleans voice come to life.
i also like it when you told us what he was wearing that day.
i think that you should make it that long of a story next time because its just to much to read.
| SeaShellEyes09 chapter 1 . 11/22/2007
LOL ive worked at a fast food place, and in drive thru to boot so i sympathise poor Napoleon. :( This is a funny story lol
| DarkDannyHot chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
LOL! I loved the part where he yelled "CAN I FRIGGING HELP YOU?"
Hilarious! Keep writting more, im loving it! Hey thats the Mcdonalds slogan, i didnt even notice! lol
| DaveysMommy chapter 1 . 10/9/2006
OK, yeah. More more more. Gimme more. This is great.
| Barbaloot Suit chapter 1 . 7/19/2006
This is a great story, don't get me wrong, but it just needs some work. I agree with the review below me that the long sigh thing is too repetative and sort of annoying. I laughed in some parts, but I don't think it's as funny as you intended it to be.
This isn't a flame, I'm just trying to help and all...
| ChrisDaywalker chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Well I didnt really like this that much because first of all,
you got to get rid of the "long sighs" quotes in your sentences
people dont always do that after every 5 mins or so and its
Second I just couldnt see the humor so funny in this, but try
to make the next chapter more better.
| Llama Beans chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I'm sorry but that did not quite capture the whole portayal of Napolean Dynamite. It was quite boring and nothing really interesting happened. Don't bother writing another chapter...
| herogary chapter 1 . 5/11/2006
AHAHAHahahAHahAHaHAHA! Oh, Napoleon. What a funny guy. Well done!