Reviews for Aravar
amebane chapter 1 . 5/3/2009
I liked this story. Good job.
Aphel chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
It could have been good IF you took into consideration the following major points:

was one of the three Kingdoms of Arnor, existing since around Third Age 900 till TA 1409.

Witch King of Angmar had been a mortal man around the middle of the Second Age and has already become nazgul in SA 2251 - more than TWO THOUSAND years BEFORE your story is set.

3. Rhudaur is quite far from the lake Evendim, which is in Western Arthedain.

4. The Barrows of Tyrn Gorthad are in Cardolan, also far from Rhudaur border.

Apart from that, is is rather good. I like the part about the ghosts accompanying the King around.