Reviews for The Greatest Thing You'll Ever Learn
frenziedquill chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
A good start...if you aren't going to finish the story, perchance tell us what Lily was dreaming about? My money says she's having some sort of prophetic dream of her demise to come...but probably not :) A few speeling mishaps, but otherwise a good story, James was a tad creepy (I much prefer him when he's being an arrogant idiot trying to be smooth, but that's just me) Lily seemed to give in a bit too easily, but maybe by this point she was tired of hating on him :D Good job
Blayze-Raine chapter 1 . 10/4/2010
Alright the quote was from The Moulin Rouge, which happens to be one of my favorite movies so good job on that part. And i like the first chapter, so lets see how this goes lol
ItsBatmanBitch chapter 2 . 8/22/2009
oh no /

it sounded really good. i'm sad tht u had no more inspiration for this one.

i rly liked it tho

CHSPatriot09 chapter 1 . 7/11/2009
Did she get raped by Voldemort or something? Ah, that's okay. That James had already gone round the bend, if you know what I mean.
What contented men desire chapter 1 . 3/30/2008
Sorry I have nothing productive to add, but I can never pass up a challenge.

Your quote is from Eden Abhez's song 'Nature Boy:'

And we spoke of many things

Fools and kings

And this he said to me

The greatest thing you'll ever learn

Is just to love, and be loved in return.
dogluv101 chapter 1 . 1/8/2008

CherriDeulle chapter 1 . 11/27/2007
what story? all i see is 'unfortunately i won't continue blah blah blah' there's nothing to continue from anyways, is there?
Bribbie chapter 2 . 7/25/2007
Thst's ok... I was curious... but, that James creeped me out, I like Goofball James, Love-sick James, smart james, Leader James, caring James, Charming James, and I even don't mind horny James, cuz i know he's a dude, and their like that, lol, but that was like creepy sex predetor James, Touch you taste you, feel you, and then he just like well either way it was scary... I always pictures James a lot like the Twins... Sirius and Remus being the other twin as Sirius would be a little nore goofy, and remus a little more serious, ironic no?(sirius serious, in case your like me and didn't catch that right away, lol and i typed it!)

As for the Twins, i haven't read what you talking about, but i think i will, but even so i don't think you should abandon, finish the plot you were working on, tweak to fit DH if need be, but i'd leave it and make an author note that it was written without regards to DH as you started it before DH and such... Don't give up, I LOVE gred and forge (and the marauders minus peter cuz he's a traitorus scum bag, who ended up strangleing himself to death, which was really weird i might add)((as you can see i have a special talent for rambling lol))
WitherWings357 chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
oh oh oh oh i know i know!

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do i get a cookie?

keep writing
chemz chapter 1 . 11/15/2006
Hi great first chappy!

"the greatest thing you'll ever learn is to love and be loved in return" nice quote and very true

FF1575 chapter 2 . 11/12/2006
omg update soon. really good
Super Cara chapter 2 . 11/8/2006
please dont quit this fic. i want to know why lily doesnt rust guys lol. the first chapter was really good. please consider updating soon. this story sounds like it could be very promising
quidditch7 chapter 2 . 11/6/2006
oh...i thought it was an actual update..
DaOnLeeSam chapter 1 . 6/26/2006
i LOVE it!Update soon!
whitephoenix33 chapter 1 . 6/8/2006
this fic looks interesting.

update soon please!
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