|Reviews for Checkmate|
| Ani-DP-TT-PJ-H-Ben10 Fan chapter 17 . 9/27/2013
*eyes water* Awww...
| rana2001 chapter 64 . 9/27/2013
EEEEeeeeEEEk I think that this is the first time I have a crush-thing with Danny. He looks so awesomecute in my mind's eye with your description!
| rana2001 chapter 60 . 9/26/2013
I have spammed the #Checkmate tag on Twitter with my thoughts on this chapter. #NoRegrets
| rana2001 chapter 57 . 9/26/2013
I just read one of THE most amazingiest chapter in the history of fanficiton.
| rana2001 chapter 56 . 9/26/2013
I would be ENRAGED if I was following this as it came out.
| rana2001 chapter 55 . 9/26/2013
Pearl. You. Are. An. A-MA-ZING. AUTHOR.
| rana2001 chapter 50 . 9/25/2013
You're a pretty amazing writer if you can trigger my physical-pain-symphathy-emphaty-thing. It's like a horrid feeling in my stomach when a character gets hurt badly in a story and the writer executes it well. *looks at nails* Oh. Uh... do you know that cliche where nervous characters nibble at their fingers at an almost impossible rate? Yeah... he.. he...
| rana2001 chapter 46 . 9/25/2013
OK, can I just hug Carl? I want to hug him can I can you give me a description of what he looks like so I can draw him please PLEASE?
| jojumolo9 chapter 1 . 9/21/2013
its box lunch not lunch box
| fallen angel chapter 32 . 9/17/2013
holy cow...*_* what have I gotten myself into? I'm going to be up alllll night long reading this fic. I blame you. *eyes author* for writing this wonderful monstrosity. xD I'm so hooked on it, and there's no good stopping point. No...every time I think 'okay, I'll stop right here', I have to click on the lovely 'next' button thinking 'but I just want to take a quick peek at the next chapter. _' and when I first started this fic, I'll guiltily admit I wanted to go to the end to see if Danny gets to go back home and be with his family. Now I can't though, it'll ruin it and I have to FINISH IT. I knew when I first found this fic, that I found it. That one EPIC fic in this whole section...I was searching for something like this, and here it is. WOW. I know I'm rambling now but seriously I can't think of enough good/positive things to say about this fic, or where to start. I LOVE the whole Vlad/Danny encounters, I teared up during Danny's visit with his family. I love how detailed you are, I can see it in my mind's eye as I'm reading it, kind of like a little mini movie going on in the background. I'm going to keep reading, but I did want to let you know again how much I"m enjoying your fic. Just...wow...now let's see if maybe I can stop reading for the night and get some sleep. *Looks at the NEXT button longingly*. On second thought...*clicks it* whoops, finger slipped. -
| fallen angel chapter 2 . 9/12/2013
Oh no...oh dear...now I've gone and done it. I've noticed in many of the fandoms that I've haunted (no pun intended) that there is at least that ONE fic that huge major fic that always takes me awhile to find, but when I find it...oh my...and this time I REALLY found it...86 chapters ** and even though I'm only at the start I can feel that this is going to be EPIC. I'm so excited to have found this, it's going to be a long read (and frustrating too because I know I'm going to have to start/stop at times cause I won't be able to read it all in one go) but man, it's going to be worth it. I LOVE how it's turning out so far, I can't wait to read more. I'm really en joying the close bond that you've given Jazz and Danny and it was nice to see Danny having some fun before everything went to chaos. 'But seriously 86 chapters;...I think I'm in love.. *goes to read more*
| purrbaby101 chapter 85 . 9/2/2013
The last time I reviewed this story was chapter 10, back when it first came out. For some reason, I stopped reading it... yeah, that was stupid. Because it was absolutely fantastic. So much character description and depth was put into both Vlad and Danny, that I just couldn't stop once I started re-reading and finishing this massive one million plus word fic. I even figured out Niane was Vlad's sister before you revealed it! Again, fantastic job, and I look forward to reading Endgame.
| cutegrly chapter 85 . 8/25/2013
wow I have to say that was amazing! I absolutely loved the relationship between Vlad and Danny and I'll be honest I was sad to see it end! It took me weeks to read this but it was worth it in the end. It was such a great story I loved it! Great Job! I suppose its time for me to move onto Endgame! Can't wait!
| AnnaAdelmeister chapter 14 . 8/12/2013
This is definitely the best chapter so far. I love George so much!
| Kataryanna chapter 55 . 8/12/2013
"Bàba!" she exclaimed in Chinese before zooming up the stairs and hugging the billionaire.
What? Someone actually wants to hug Vlad? I found this funny and sweet.