|Reviews for if Only|
| samsolace chapter 1 . 2/28/2008
This review has to be in two parts, the technical and the artistic.
Technically, it was very difficult to read your story. I finally pulled it off the internet and double spaced the whole thing just to be able to decipher it. It needs paragraph separations and dialog separations, with double spacings, in the worst way. But that is merely technical and easy enough to fix.
I really liked how you got MerDer back together. The story was sweet and fun, particularly the cute romantic part between them. There was something wonderful about Addison getting her man too.
| Heather0120 chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
aww so cute i loved it! great writing! :)
| Puckleberryfan82 chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I loved it. I really do love any story that has D/M geting together or back together which ever the story may be. lol. Please post more D/M stories soon.
| pianoem chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
Aw, that's lovely! I think it would be easier if it were in smaller paragraphs and speech in separate lines. But I love it!
| Hoot-Hoot-Ashie chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
That was soo good I loved it