|Reviews for A Kind of Immortal|
| KureNo11 chapter 1 . 3/6
this was definitely 100 words that gave me one hundred bunch of warm feeling :)
They both deserved it. The love, the child, the family, and the peaceful life.
| Melitot Proud Eye chapter 1 . 4/23/2009
"Touching" is the best word to describe this. Delicate like a ripple on water, and so true...
| Long Island grace chapter 1 . 6/3/2006
This is such a beautiful fic. I think Kenshin is the type of person who would really want a child...and just how much he wants it you show in this fic.
Both Kenshin and Kaoru have not had family for the longest time...and suddenly they do. ] You did a great job with this fic.
| dernhelm chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
aw, sweet. _ K&K forever! )
| xZig-zagx chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Oh, I like this insight! Very orginal! Very sweet too! Great job!
| SiriusFan13 chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
_ x oro...
So good. i really like this fic. a lot of emotion and power behind your words. nice job:)
| VyxenSkye chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Aw... That's cute... Update other stories soon, and I really liked this one!
| guardian forever chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
omgosh, that is so beautiful! Im not really a fan of ficlets, but this is well done!
| White Rabbit Tale chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
That was so sweet. By the second paragraph, I knew it would be a happy ending. I like how you thought about something that most people overlook in the series, and applied your awesome writing skills of doom.
I like the tones of desperation you put in, emphasising the word "miraculous" and using "thirst" (I am in love with well-chosen verbs!)
Nice tying together in the last sentence. All around a GREAT piece.
| skenshingumi chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
I love the wording. In a breath you go from so sadly poignant, ("No one loved him for his flesh and blood only. There was no one who peered into his face to see signs of himself, herself, in his eyes, nose, lips.") to joyous ("How miraculously, this had changed."). I love the greed they have for the joy and sense of continuity from themselves to their new baby ("...such thirsty eyes..."). For two people with sad and lonely pasts, you capture a special moment beautifully.
| Kristy-chan chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
this was a cute little ficlet! great job!
| Gypsy-chan chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Nice! I like how Kenshin and Kaoru could see their eternal existence in the son they made from love. I love chibi Kenji! Anyhoo, it's really amazing what you can do with 100 words. Great job!_
| Silent Game chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Aw, Kenshin and Kaoru with Kenji, yes? This is the sort of ficlet that just makes me smile. Very sweet.
| sueb262 chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Oh man this is wonderful! This is it, this is what that baby brings, this is that inexplicable epiphany, and I LOVE thinking about their getting this great gift!
| Warg chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Very nice work here...
Loved the simplicity and the softness of the scene...
p.s:: Hey did u get alerted for this fic... i didn't receive the mail for this one, i also posted something, but i haven't recieved alerts either...