Reviews for Spring Time in the Fox Den
HoloObssession chapter 2 . 7/19
Dear Tenshi,
I enjoyed the first chapter quite a lot. Though the word Chibi
was used far too much making it a bit annoying.
Best of luck in further endeavors.
T.Redd chapter 16 . 3/19
I instantly ship Zabuza and Obito
kay-san chapter 32 . 12/2/2015
After 4days of reading g I cried the ending made me cry it was beautiful I loved it your a wonderful wrighter
Mangaanimea113 chapter 32 . 1/27/2015
Awwwww beautiful I love it xxx
Luv-ly Stories chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Cool story
thenarutoking chapter 32 . 10/16/2013
i loved everything and i cried when naruto came back to konoha after his death you are an amazing writer.
o0Che0o chapter 9 . 7/1/2013
No! you soooooooo don't suck at writing. You have a few typo errors that really get to me [ i mean i really get pissed] but come on, who doesn't make mistake... its like the hallmark of being human!
Your ideas are amazing too! you develop your stories and stuff. I'm sorry for the pretty lame pickup but please know that I'm sincere with it. Don't ever give up on your skill, after all, its one of those that always gets better with time and practice and so far you are up there [and way better than i am].
twinz2525 chapter 32 . 6/4/2013
Whoa! I loved the entire story except the ending I think it could of been better!
EPICNESS RULES chapter 9 . 3/9/2013
wow who ever told you can't write a story they are wrong, this story is pretty dawn interesting if you asked me so far it has been really keeping my interest so just ignore that person and just believe in yourself not them.
PshhAnonymous chapter 32 . 2/27/2013
I really really loved the ending this story is truly amazing imma share it on my profile for u :) -Dawn
nina-bell chapter 25 . 2/23/2013
omfg i hate u and thes sad endings god ur so mean *crys* D;
Taigon Shikkin chapter 32 . 1/17/2013
This is going to be one of my most favorite stories of all time!
Taigon Shikkin chapter 29 . 1/16/2013
Nice cross over with Saiyuki! I thought the name of the restaurant was familiar... But I totally didn't see that coming! I loved this chapter by the way. But even though I didn't ask for anything, I thank you for actually knowing what Saiyuki is! I tell people that I watch it and they intelligently reply"Huh? What's that?" Then I sigh and start explaining to them what its about. But any ways THANK YOU!
VampyNekoHunter18 chapter 32 . 12/23/2012
I really do love this, 5 star and two thumbs up. You rock :))
Icha icha Minato Kyuubi chapter 32 . 12/17/2012
Fianlly I was able to finish the whole story! Its very interesting and you have interesting and rare pairings, such as Gaara with Hinata, and Zabuza and Obito for example. And I never read a story where Kakashi and Zabuza are brothers. What I dont like is what poor Naruto went through. But I am glad you let him return. I always tried to imagine how it would look when four white foxes are prancing around a forward walking person. Must be looking a bit odd. And I liked that Minato is in the story. He is one of my favourite Character. I am a yaoi Fan too and like Sasunarussau. You really did a big epic story, but sometimes I think you wirte too much side parts of side characters, who bored me a bit. The fight scenses were good, but in the final fight, I had a bit problems realizing whats going on. I normally dont like when Naruto suffers too much, but its your story and evey writer has his own way of using the characters. I am writing myself, Naruto stories too, but only in German, english is not my native tounge. As Narutos Good-like appearance, I think he is on the best way to it in the original manga story too.
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