|Reviews for the Secret of Slytherin|
| Jamies chapter 2 . 9/11
Thanks for making Dudley a person, and not just an extension of his parents. Not that I'm fond of him, but his usually written as a lifeless accessory, so it's cool to see you not going that way.
| smiles2go chapter 52 . 9/7
This was extremely awesome! I dunno why it doesn't have 10,000 favs!
| Guest chapter 31 . 8/24
This story has really gone down hill. It started with a plot, but has deteriorated to mindless teenybopper drivel and vapid makeovers-something no one over the age of twelve cares about. In short, your story is boring due to its lack of direction.
This is where I quit reading.
| Guest chapter 30 . 8/24
You can always tell how vapid an author is by two things in a story: the presence of a Mary Sue (Yolande) and how many chapters are wasted on shopping sprees or makeovers. After all, what a person looks like is the most important thing about them according to 99% of all bimbos.
| Guest chapter 28 . 8/24
So what will be the pairings in this story?
| Guest chapter 12 . 8/23
I hate Yolande. She adds nothing of value to the story, is vapid, and is badly written. I hope Voldemort kills her-it'd improve your story. Also, it's a stupid name for a Mary Sue.
| Guest chapter 42 . 8/16
you depicted ron beautifully, most people feel he is unworthy of the golden trio,(god help those idiots,) anyway beautiful chapter
| Guest chapter 40 . 8/16
oh my god! no words there. you made me speechless.
| bibliophile030 chapter 52 . 8/15
Your story was absolutely, bloody brilliant. I much enjoyed the plot twists and depth of characters. You proposed an interesting take on the moral ambiguities of the Harry Potter world. Thank you for an excellent story.
| mrsMxyzptlk chapter 4 . 7/16
I really like Harry's introspection here. I've long thought that the house system was detrimental, but I've never read a story that really addresses it like this. You've really captured the characters' reactions realistically, especially Harry, given his fear of being found out as a closet Slytherin and his reasons for rejecting Slytherin in the first place.
| ArchimedesAckermann chapter 5 . 7/11
No offense, but this is super confusing. Nothing's clear and Harry's so subdued and almost like a bystander.
Well obviously I haven't read much further into the story but just letting you know that confusing the readers like this sometimes turns them away from the story.
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/4
Yay, I'm glad talking to Snape cheered Harry mentioned no pairings but I'm in favor of Yolande and Hermione if you do take that route.
| ranoshi chapter 42 . 6/4
Ron is a wonderful character to explore and you write him beautifully.
| ranoshi chapter 40 . 6/4
Cheers for Ron, he seriously gave them something to think about because turning on a Knut really is ridiculous if they really considered Draco a friend.
| ranoshi chapter 16 . 6/4
Harry is sweet, I'll smuggle you some toast haha. Harry mirroring people in how they treat him is very insightful. This is my favorite chapter by far.