I like the song!

Love the story so much! But I thought I’d let you know, that it’s a bezoar that cures most poisons and adding powdered root of asphodel to an infusion of wormwood makes a powerful sleeping potion known as the fraught of living death. Not sure if you write that answer on purpose, or messed up, but it was annoying me so I thought I’d let you know.

What the hell are you on about Lily being from a Wizarding family?! "Slughorn paired people," Snape commented far too lightly. "James Potter and Lily Evans – perfect for one another, of course, both from good wizarding families, both... high-spirited. Even during Potions, he would switch us around until he found pairs that got things done, that worked well together." Did you read the books? Like Lily IS NOT FROM A WIZARDING FAMILY! She’s a Muggleborn! And you said earlier Harry was a Muggleborn WHICH IS NOT TRUE! Very confused how you got those two huge things so fricking wrong! And this was written after the Deathly Hallows came out. So everyone knew Snape and Lily were childhood friends! So very confused about the canon. Especially the parts that it’s nearly impossible to mess up, yet somehow you did?

Harry, flirt with Ginny! Love that even Draco can see Ron and Hermione like each other! Harry, you’re not unsorted if you’re in the Gryffindor common room!

I mean, Harry loves being in Gryffindor and even told the hat he was wrong about him thriving in Slytherin when he talked to him after the whole Chamber of Secrets debacle. Is Harry done having to obey Draco?

Uh, why did Hermione have to give Harry the spender? Some things are very confusing. Like the sphere. Why was it red when Hermione touched it and then gold when Harry touched it?

I want to know how the Chamber changed. And Snape know knows the parchment is something James, Sirius, Remus, and Peter created. Lol. Love that Snape and Remus are working together.

Wait, he went into the Chamber via the entrance but he’s no longer in the Chamber? Love that the map added to its self. Why didn’t it add the Room of Requirement though?

Snape was nine in 1969. That should say something like 1989. Snape was in Lily and James’ year in Hogwarts. He was born in 1960 and went to Hogwarts from 1971-1978. This fic was written after Deathly Hallows came out. So all the dates should be there. Just saying. I can’t believe Draco made Harry say all that shit last chapter. Harry needs to let his emotions go. He’s going to in fo a real long cry soon.

Harry’s already the Seeker. He doesn’t need to tryout again. Will we see Ginny at all? She’ll be a chaser on the Gryffindor Quidditch team.

Uh, Hermione and Yonlde didn’t need to make a new crest. All First Year get Hogwarts robes in Diagone Alley that already have the Hogwarts crest with each House symbol. I’m very confused why you made it so Hermione made one when it already exists on robes!

Where’s Ginny? I’d like to see Harry and Ginny hang out!

I’m very confused. Love that Ron is worried about Harry. But some characters seem OOC. Like Hermione and even Ron a little bit. And Snape asked Ron to keep an eye on Harry? Interesting.

Interesting. I’m glad Snape gave Harry his assignments back. Still very confused why Harry was acting all anxious and weird and Snape was asking him what he had eaten. So Harry is obscuring all of his dark thoughts and soon they’ll need somewhere to go? Oof. I’m surprised Snape isn’t more angry at Harry.

Wtf, Harry! Using an Unforgivable is a one way ticket to Azkaban! Then again, Draco almost completed saying “Crucio” so he’d be going along with you. Wonder why Hermione is acting all weird. Usually she’s one for respecting teachers and now she wants to get Snape back?