Reviews for the Secret of Slytherin
scarlettmeadows chapter 16 . 1/27/2016
Someone guessed Draco's motivation? He has a plan? Apart from being a complete ****? :P Just please don't tell me he wants Potter as his friend. Gah! LOVE Harry/Snape interaction! Was Hilarious! And Lupin's entrance was just as good! :D
scarlettmeadows chapter 15 . 1/27/2016
LOVE SNAPE. FULLY IN LOVE WITH SNAPE. :D Absolutely adorable with Lilly Evans...and this Obscuro thing is truly fascinating. Not looking forward to the backlash of the Griffindor argument, though
scarlettmeadows chapter 14 . 1/27/2016
RAISING THE OTHER HAND. LOVE YOU. HATE DRACO. HATE DRACO MORE PASSIONATELY THAN ANYONE'S EVER HATED A MALFOY BEFORE. OMG. Whaaaat?! How is Harry letting him get away with this?! If Harry told anyone what he was doing, they'd let him off the punishment instantly! Although I love how you show that Harry really has that deep-seated fear of his friends only staying with him for the fame. Nice plot device :)
scarlettmeadows chapter 13 . 1/27/2016
scarlettmeadows chapter 11 . 1/27/2016
I HATE DRACO MALFOY. Also, Harry needs to grow a pair. What's the worst thing that could have happened if he'd refused Malfoy?! Not the CLOAK dam*it! grr :P
scarlettmeadows chapter 9 . 1/27/2016
So freaky! Why on earth is Harry having so much trouble with the word Master specifically? I can understand his reluctance to belittle and humiliate himself, despite his experiences with the Dursleys, but I find his reactions to the different orders fascinating. Also, Hermione needs a hug :P
scarlettmeadows chapter 8 . 1/27/2016
LOVE Ron! And Harry needs help. Seriously. Not in a bad way, but he's definitely repressing :P Although that might be my perception having read umpteen fanfics where Sirius dies and then Harry goes off his Rocker. Btw- didn't Fleur and Bill marry in Book 7, not 6?
scarlettmeadows chapter 7 . 1/27/2016
OMG. IMPERIOUS?! And Harry under the control of Draco Malfoy is not going to go well AT ALL...and REMUS?! The disappointment made ME cringe! :D Brilliant. Terrifying. But brilliant :D
viharos chapter 15 . 12/25/2015
Yes! I am digging where you have gone so far. Obscura is insidious and alluring! You are tackling some heavy mind shit with this, and it's great. The scene a few chapters back with Lupin revealing tendency for use of Dark spells and reasons therein, based on personality, was riveting. And then all the Draco shit...! Oh, man. Neat twist with Snape having done the same paper - I am wondering as to the relevance other than coincidence?
viharos chapter 8 . 12/25/2015
I am enjoying this fic so far. The full premise is still approaching, which is neat. I was getting a little skeptical of Harry, so this chapter was an excellent breath for me, to see your awareness of his strange behavior. Ron was a great choice for this confrontation, and you have been portraying him very well; the fanon-hates-Ron meme is tired and misguided (good point on the chess). I am still a bit dubious on the Snape-Harry rapport, because it seems a bit too comfortable - I have faith that you know what you're doing, though. My theory on the Muggleborn kids is like, founder heirs?
I love that the plot is still opaque, and I am enjoying your writing. Onward!
Calmzone1 chapter 52 . 9/27/2015
Really enjoyed reading this from beginning to end. I hope you do get to do the sequel one day. I am hoping they get to pull Sirius back through the Veil.
ochreish chapter 52 . 9/13/2015
I really enjoy the way you write-indeed, for a good ten chapters I couldn't take my eyes of the screen-but I couldn't bring myself to finish the entire thing. I just found all of the characters twisted almost unrecognisably. Traits that I loved in canon were not present, and I found myself lost in the murkiness of Harry's mind and obscuro. The level of homoeroticism was also, I feel, a tad overdone.
Guest chapter 5 . 8/3/2015
Snape...he's being too nice. He hasn't thawed out yet...

And also Harry should get paid for the teaching job. Actually he better, lol.
Fawkes1725 chapter 52 . 7/29/2015
Well done. I really enjoyed the story.
sarahsezlove chapter 52 . 6/7/2015
Totally wonderful.
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