Reviews for the Secret of Slytherin
alaskangirl24 chapter 3 . 4/26/2006
this is really good please add more chapters when you can find the time to do so please,thanks
GinaKaAmaya chapter 3 . 4/26/2006
This is a great fanfiction with an equally interesting plot so far, but a little editing ,may, be needed.

Diagon Alley is where they meet, not Hogsmead(which is next to the school).

I DON'T WANT TO BE MEAN.I ONLY WANT TO HELP IMPROVE AN ALREADY EXCELENT FANFICTION.
claymade chapter 3 . 4/26/2006
Fascinating... I really like the way you work with Dudley in this one; of all the characters in canon, he's always been the one that I'd wished that Rowling had done more with-and you explore that possibility excellently! Great stuff.
Lady-Indis chapter 2 . 4/26/2006
Ooh! interesting :D Dudley just might be a wizard. I like how the plot's moving along-and the way Dudley's getting along with Harry. Yay!
Lady-Indis chapter 1 . 4/26/2006
Wow! Very nice! I love your style, it's very true to J.K. Rowlings-excellent! :) I hope he gets into advanced potions! Sheesh, dumb ol' Snape :P Just kidding...he's one of my favorites.

Anyway. Keep up the good work!
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