Reviews for Please Forgive Me
Musa'sHeadphones chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
i love this! its so beautiful and sad! adding to favorites!
Helena Aeris chapter 1 . 8/3/2006
...Wow. It's really, very sad. It's weird, but I like it. Tragic things never cease to inspire me.

It's great. Although the fourth paragraph, the line 'We hide our faces', wouldn't it be better if it was 'We hid our faces'?

Regards,

The Shadow Phoenix
thir13enth chapter 1 . 6/17/2006
wow

i saw that some parts were fromthe song you're beautiful

XD
Darth Vader chapter 1 . 6/6/2006
;-; So tragic...so beautiful! -sniffles- ;-;
godtech chapter 1 . 5/31/2006
AWW...it's sad! But it's REALLY good though! .
Orokimaru chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Oh my god. That was so beautiful. I don't know how to put it but it was very good. I love poetry and I think this poem was very good and sad at the same time. Robin and Raven are my two favorite titans and I think you really put their characters in this poem. Don't worry Raven, Robin will be yours sooner or later lol.
ravenslair chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
Well, I can see why you were emotional when you read this over. A very sad and moving poem, and my heart truly goes out to Raven. A good poem or story should move you, make you feel some type of emotion, and this certainly did. Thanks...Gerry