Reviews for How Can I Ease The Pain
DaddysLiitleGirl chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
fudge! this is GOOD! damn good!
Yukinna chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Great Xiaoyin Xiaoyu filnally shows Jin how it feels to be the hurt looking foward to another fic :D
La Petite Rose chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Hey this was okay. but you know i'm not a Xiaoyin fan. It was different.

P.s.-Cool update for Avenger for the Children
LaineLush chapter 1 . 4/27/2006

It's pretty good. At least you've made Xiaoyu a bit more mature over the whole Jin issue, which is ruining her life.

But to be honest, I wasn't amazed by it. Not that it was grammatically bad or anything but I've read a bunch of those stories already. At least you startled me at the ending back there. Definitely not as I would've anticipated.

The song seemed pretty nice, though.

Hopefully, this won't disdain you from Xiaoyin. I do hope this'll help you in your writing. This is not a flame, however, but a constructive criticism which I do hope you wouldn't take for granted.

Much Love

Scarlet-child chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
this is cute.

the ending was a little unexpected, but i liked how she just walked away from him. its about time she does it, instead of chasing after him all the time.

i actually thought it would be better without the lyrics, but thats just my opinion.

good job xx