|Reviews for How Can I Ease The Pain|
| Duchess K chapter 1 . 7/23/2012
fudge! this is GOOD! damn good!
| Yukinna chapter 1 . 5/22/2006
Great Xiaoyin Xiaoyu filnally shows Jin how it feels to be the hurt looking foward to another fic :D
| La Petite Rose chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Hey this was okay. but you know i'm not a Xiaoyin fan. It was different.
P.s.-Cool update for Avenger for the Children
| LaineLush chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
It's pretty good. At least you've made Xiaoyu a bit more mature over the whole Jin issue, which is ruining her life.
But to be honest, I wasn't amazed by it. Not that it was grammatically bad or anything but I've read a bunch of those stories already. At least you startled me at the ending back there. Definitely not as I would've anticipated.
The song seemed pretty nice, though.
Hopefully, this won't disdain you from Xiaoyin. I do hope this'll help you in your writing. This is not a flame, however, but a constructive criticism which I do hope you wouldn't take for granted.
| Scarlet-child chapter 1 . 4/27/2006
this is cute.
the ending was a little unexpected, but i liked how she just walked away from him. its about time she does it, instead of chasing after him all the time.
i actually thought it would be better without the lyrics, but thats just my opinion.
good job xx