Reviews for Contemplanys Hermi
screamballoon chapter 2 . 5/1/2006
You've started a new story! Excellent.

I like your description of the bohemian hang-out in the first chapter; very evocative. And you've captured my interest about these two characters. One technical comment (surprisingly): the 2nd sentence in the 2nd chapter seems a little clunky. The rest of your writing flows as beautifully as always.