Reviews for The Things Raven Feels
Dixxy chapter 23 . 12/6/2017
Hi Tabris !

Very nice collection of short stories that ya wrote here. I found them funny, moving, sad, fascinating in turns. Nice reading, really ! I just did regret that you wrote so much about Terra and so little about Jinx, the horns-haired thief having my preference (not too interested in Terra, alas...).

The main critic i would formulate is about the "form" of the story, with several typos and probably even more word ommissions (i.e. words lacking in the text). That was a pity, but it wasn't that widespread that i spoiled the reading pleasure, mind ya.

So, all in all, a very cool collection of stories on various subjects, either funny or serious, that aroused my interest and made my want to get more. Hance my following this.

Keep up the good work... or just call it a fiction and update it as "complete", whichever ya deem fit.

Thanxxxx 4 writing this, and long live Raven, our favourite empath !

Take care !

Zanybro chapter 23 . 6/21/2015 always disappoints me when a good story ends.
Zanybro chapter 7 . 6/16/2015
hmmmmmmmmm...I don't know if this chapter was a good idea, it probably pisses people off...
Zanybro chapter 3 . 6/13/2015
man...this shit is deep... I wish you didn't quit fanfiction.
Zanybro chapter 18 . 6/10/2015
Zanybro chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
raven x jinx, love it
Christian chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
The prince of darknis an all dames cahows your acktiwell one and onley thats bin wayting 2 meet an se you im the one thats bin wayting 4 you bleev it ore not an text me mynomber 951 723 7792:) pleez text me i love who your are I want 2 be close 2 you an you 2 me not really eney one ells I hope you got all 3 notes
Christian chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
You're way to sacrid of a being to just have one person here thare should be mineey. Not 2 git all gowey and romantic. but I'm being 100 % onist and you no that. So I'm just telling you I've werly hard and I'm werking hard 2 make my sellf magick and powerfull in doing it fer you ore fore the ever life of you your such a sweet girl I'm 18 but ackt older 2 I would love 2 talk more and hopefully you got the first note I seent 2 the 2 the princes of darknis ps love3 the prince of cahow
Christian chapter 2 . 11/8/2013
I hope that the reall raven git this. But I've reed allout of what you said. And thare really is allout about you i an 2 like. And I don't no y youde say stuff like that about your sellf you are beautiful I want you 2 no an I've bin wayting 2 meet you fore along time we should hang out soon Ann some thing I just reed inspired me 2 keep living on and who do I really want 2 be around me an dose that person really care about me more thane just how I looke you no its kinda weird noing I've bin with people that don't even care about me fer allout of my life. And to me it seems like you'd. Want some like this in you're life as a boy frind but just all power full like you rite:) and I'm not as powerfull as you yet but win it cums down 2 how powerfull are normal people can git if reacht pritty fare into the limitations. Cuzz I bleev u need 2 keep your buatty ore we need 2 keep it going thare should be in opening in this would with life like you starting agin your way 2 sack rid you
Mystery Critic chapter 10 . 8/9/2013
Lmfao! Vat was sho damn funny!
Mystery Critic chapter 9 . 8/9/2013
Mystery Critic chapter 8 . 8/9/2013
I'm at a loss for words. Interesting. I'm usually not. Especially for something that FREAKIN' AWESOME!
Mystery Critic chapter 7 . 8/9/2013
Uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu uuuuuuuhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhh... I worship the Goddess of Night; Nyx. I've dealt with cultists myself, but that was a bit much. Raven, good job for taking it so well, and Granny Cry might be losing it when he goes to BBQ etiquette.
Mystery Critic chapter 6 . 8/9/2013
Mystery Critic chapter 5 . 8/9/2013
COOKIE DOUGH! That's all I'm saying. On wait. I just said that too. Damn. And that. SHIT!
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