Reviews for On The Other Side
Emiko Suzuki chapter 23 . 8/12/2010
nice, please update soon i wanna know wat happens please please please
Dark Blade9015 chapter 18 . 12/5/2009
your creative aura out shines many may it continue to help you with your dreams
bloodvampyre chapter 1 . 10/31/2008
I love this story it's soo awesome, ur a great writer
Firion316 chapter 16 . 5/2/2008
Ouch! Moon is totally out of control. A sound aura on steroids. Ear protection strongly recommended!

Which will prove more powerful: the wind or the sound? I hope that Jynn doesn't spin out as well. That could get interesting.

Excellent chapter. Please update soon.
Firion316 chapter 15 . 2/13/2008
This makes the third chapter in which you have introduced a dark, shadowy, mystery figure. He seems to be connected (possibly) to a wind aura. From the sounds of it, he may be quite powerful. What's his relationship to the rest of the Defenders? And what is "Jykelle's" aura? We seem to see these two hanging out together alot. Will Xaioto battle them? And lastly (I know, I'm full of questions), who is Jason?

Please update soon. Can't wait.
XeroRami chapter 14 . 11/10/2007
Darkensea,

It seems that you have decided to put a shadowy and/or corrupt organization in the background of your story. Ah well. If you don't have something to fight, then why fight at all, right?

Reminds me of the classic DBZ: Goku finds someone stronger than himself, so he gets even stronger to beat him. I suppose that's what it comes down to. I just hope that the main bad guy isn't a mutated bunny rabbit or something.

Looking forward to more!

/XeroRami
Isaac A. Drake chapter 14 . 11/3/2007
I won't mention the length.

Otherwise you set it up real nicely.
Jason Moon chapter 13 . 8/28/2007
yo u have to put p the next chapter i must read the finished product
XeroRami chapter 13 . 8/9/2007
Darkensea,

Welcome back! Thank you very much for continuing this story. There are few Psychic Academy fanfics and even fewer worth reading. When I last reviewed, this was the best of all. (I have not checked for new stories since.)

Another interesting chapter for Xiaoto and his friends. It seems you are going to try and parallel the beach image very closely. Which might necessitate that Xiaoto and Soni have 100% Aura Com... whatever it was.

Looking forward to next semester!

/XeroRami
Isaac A. Drake chapter 13 . 8/8/2007
Yays! Another chapter! I haven't read one since the well...last one. XD
v-mangrl chapter 12 . 7/5/2007
pleasse continue thisn story i don;t want it to done i'll miss xaioto, moon and azural
Evil Riggs chapter 1 . 4/18/2007
I endorse this event or product.
storylistener chapter 12 . 3/26/2007
This is absolutely WONDERFUL! What a surprising twist, this shadow in the mist. I'll have to go back and read Ch. 10 again, because I couldn't read the end of it due to a malfunction. I can't wait for you to write more! One question: Is this happening before, after, or during the Manga timeline? Anyway, STUPENDOUS JOB and WRITE MORE SOON!
Yami Kero chapter 12 . 3/20/2007
Ok. I can only put it like this. AWESOME! I really liked the fact of the whole dark side thing. As a matter of fact...I was possibly thinking of creating one myself. This is just an awesome fic.

Keep it up. Hope to see more.
Jason Moon chapter 1 . 3/12/2007
well i love the story in general and thnx again for showing me this story too, im also honored that my personality is also the bases of not one but two of your characters thnx again and ima post my story for you to read too
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