Mpreg pisses me off. Good story until it got to that point though.
Keep writing!:-)

FANTASTIC

I must say that this is ine of the most storys that i just dont want it to end
Lovely work
I love each part of it and i look foward to any new thing you write
Looots of love :)

Wonderful story! Thanks for sharing!

I like the fact that kisame had the final kill.

Pretty good story

Dialogues are not paragraphs.. separate them...kudos to the story by the way

I would have the epilogue without the M-preg part Imo. But beside that, it was a very enjoyable read that I will most probably re-read. You made a super powerful Harry that is still believable. All the OOC-ness was explainable with concrete logic.

the only low point for me was the epilogue end even there I guess its easily explainable.

I have to admit that I did squee'd at Naruto and Sasuke becoming an Item.

Once again, A very good read one the level of Auryn.

bravo that gets the people in to your story you have me jumping laughing wanting to kill rip and killl and make me allwww and all the around heart beaker good fights with out to much all in all 5/5 on good job loved your story and wish there was more like you you be a great writer some day! this is SoraMalfoySlythern who is to lazzy to log in you can call me bunny

Simply marvelous!

this is a awsome story thow a side story of what happend to aketsuki when thay took naruto would be cool. awsome story!

this is awsome

I loved the part where Harry negotiates "better living conditions" for the Kyuubi

a very great ending.

The end almost made me cry. This story was incredible.