Thanks for the story!

It’s not a huge deal of course but I have to ask: could you put in line breaks (or if they got removed by the website’s formatting, maybe find a way to add them in again)?

Sometimes between one sentence and the next the story jumps several days and it’s always a little bit jolting to read—in this chapter for example, Harry beginning to plot revenge against Dumbledore by going to the press is immediately followed by him succeeding without the reader gaining any knowledge as to what actually happened?

Aaaaah this is aoooo cute *-* Loved it, seriously! Such a cool idea, great character development(yeah they are ooc but who cares, right?) and the sweetest ending. The mpreg part wouldn't have been necessary for my taste, but the rest was super sweet and I loved it:3

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!

Another no. The different appearances are just too random. I'm truly curious why you didn't make things easier and have Harry start looking into crossing worlds to explain why they keep crossing over? As it is it seems to happen whenever it's convenient or whenever the story 'needs' it to happen.

I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! But, did you ever actually say what his animagus form is? Because I looked, and I never saw any mention of it outside that one chapter, but that's a vague description that could honestly be one of two things as far as I could tell... Still loved it, and I'm happy for all the happy couples that got together in the end! THANK YOU!

The Younger Half of AshesGleamandGlow

No, fuck this bullshit. He-Harry-is obviously extremely psychologically damaged and the Hokage should notice and realize that he should not be mived up higher in the command or be sent on assassination missions ever. That bitch should realize her foolish and crude mistake. Friggin Dumbleprat double.

And myyyy geeart wiiilll go ooooonnn

WE HAVE A COMING OF AGE RITUAL! YES! :-)

Well then. I squee at Harry and Naruto's relationship! And I'm glad Harry is not being forced to become a Shinobi. Does he not see Itachi in his dreams anymore? Hmmmmmm...

Awwww DRAMIONE YEEEEEEEEEEES QUEEN!

What else can I say but: ... LET'S GOOOOOOOOOOO! :D

And that is why an angry Harry and Kushina would be utterly terrifying and such

Either a griffin or a hippogriff. Or are they the same thing?

love it