Reviews for Dreams |
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Ox King chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 This is not a flame. This is a constructive criticism review. I have to tell you that you should have done your homework for the Naruto time-line. Your current time-line is totally distorted. First of all. Itachi is about 15-16 when the Uchiha massacre occured. Sasuke was about 6. If Team 7 is twelve that makes 21-22. Sakura doesn't become Tsunade apprentice until after the battle at the End between Naruto and Sasuke. Sausuke has gone to Orochimaru and Naruto has left for a 2 1/2 year training with Jiraiya. I really like Dreams. I think Harry Potter and Naruto make great crossoves. Please write more chapters. Thanks. |
Twin Tails Speed chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 Good chapter. |
sona chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 yay itachi! |
anissa32 chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 The more I read this the more I like this story! It is shapin up very nicely! I think that is was a good idea for Harry to stay in Konoha right now with everything that has happened. He has finally managed to get some friends and to find a place that he feels like he belongs. The only downside to this is the fact that he really can't "be" with Itachi the way that he wants to. But, Tsunade and Kakashi have been a great help to him. I just hope that he managaed to survive going through his majority and coming into his magic in full. I'm also glad that he was finally ablke to meet Itachi in person. I've been waiting for this for awhile and it was well worth it. I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how it all pans out. Otherwise keep up the great job! |
insanechildfanfic chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 this is great |
Ash of Mine chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 That was cute and kind of sad : i know it's too early for either of the main characters to die but nothing keeps you from making their lifes painful and difficult ('cause all good authors are sadistic and you are a good author ! ;p)... well, when Harry comes of age, the release of magic will be great, ne ? the wards he put up won't hide them, ne ? So he's going to attract a lot of attention (- enters Orochimaru... ) can be funny if Tsunade feels it from her tower ! Btw, i imagined Harry working in a book shop instead of as a medic and the only image i had was of Harry hiding all the 'Come Come Paradise' serie and new releases from Kakashi... lol o |
realdarkangel chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 aw, so sweet, i love it . yet another great chappie, keep up the gd work XD |
akuma-river chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 Are the muggles dead at least? (they deserve to be called family). Also it is sannin (3, nin (ninja). Jiraiya is sometimes refered to sennin (hermit, ninja) I think. Keep up the great work, coolsa. |
Firehedgehog chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 grin |
Xurtan chapter 9 . 5/10/2006 Great chapter as always. It was kind of sweet. I liked the interaction with Kakashi. |
akuma-river chapter 8 . 5/9/2006 Wow... So many things happened. I had a feeling it would go down like that. So what happens now? Is the Akatsuki going to get involved? Keep up the great work, coolsa. |
insertappropropriatenamehere chapter 8 . 5/9/2006 Harry's in trouble... his ability sound's like Kabuto's. |
sunao chapter 8 . 5/9/2006 ... I'm in love with this fic really thank you to write this fiction and thank you to udapte so fast |
Naome chapter 1 . 5/9/2006 I like this story very much. it is quite interesting. Please write more!_! |
Twin Tails Speed chapter 8 . 5/9/2006 This is a really interesting chapter. |