Reviews for Dreams
Kaaera chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
Oh dear. I can't wait to see what they do about the majority!

And I like KakaIru. I didn't even think of that. :) I won't mind it though!

Keep up the great work!
realdarkangel chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
wow, yet another great chappie _ glad ya put a little Itachi in it. why dose Kakashi always have dat book with em? powerful Harry rocks _
Firehedgehog chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
continue
arsenic-graffiti chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
Harry's age of magical majority is 18? *blinks*

Anyway - you're right, it's not a pretty ending. Severus is alive, though! *does a happy dance* Of course, he still has to cope with the aftermath of the war...

I can't figure out though whether or not Moony was murdered when he hugged Harry. I think you need to improve the transitions of the scenes in the flashback.

On Sakura hearing Harry: Oh, dear. I have this strange feeling that this might become a problem in the future. Well. *pause* Even if it isn't going to happen, I have to be wary of it. You have a thing for creating unexpected plot twists.

Hmm... if there is so much magic in the world and magic is different from chakra, then why aren't there any magic users? It's quite puzzling, really. Will the answer come up somewhere in the fic?
sona chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
is there something between kakashi and hasrry?
jessicaknows chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
OMG! Cant wasit to see what happens next!
Ash of Mine chapter 8 . 5/9/2006
O_o That was a *really* long chapter... SANKYU SO MUCH ! o Oh dear, did you really have to kill everybody off in the wizarding world ? Y_Y well at least Harry don't have anyone waiting for him there since he's supposed to be dead but i really feel bad for Hermione (wanna send her in Konoha ?lol) but then again it's not about her anymore... GO! Itachi ! They are just so cute ! btw, since Harry doesn't want to be a ninja, will he try being a medic ? with his ability and his desire to save his friends, it can work, ne ? That was really a good chapter ! Good luck with the next one !
arsenic-graffiti chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
And Harry's Slytherin side comes out yet again.

On whodunit: Hmm. *pause* Akatsuki conspiracy theory? I dunno - I think one advantage you have here is that the identity of the head of the organization isn't explicitly revealed.

pairings: Well... Is Haku still alive? He's such a memorable character for me, even if he only showed up for one arc. If he's alive here, can you pair him up with Neji? Oh, and one other pairing - KakaIru.

On SasuNaru - I have conflicted opinions on this pairing. While I feel that there is something between them, I just want to strangle Sasuke for being such an idiot and joining Sound (and everybody knows just how much of a twisted bastard Orochimaru is!). I'd like to see, should you go on with this pairing, how you'd manage to cure Sasuke's stupidity.
Namaco chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
Yay good story, well all your stories are good but this one is really good. Pairings...? ano... kakashixiruka I guess it fits nicely and narutox sasule or hinata that's all i got, The itachi harry thing is hott enough really but those are good too.
Twin Tails Speed chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
This is a good chapter.
anissa32 chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
Well, it looks like Harry is settling into Konoha nicely, but it still doesn't explain how he got there and what exactly happened to him. I know that it probably has something to do with Voldemort, but I wonder why it's causing Harry pain to try to remember it. Also, in regards to blaming someone for the massacre that Itachi has been accussed of I think Orochimaru is the most likely candidate.

He has always had his finger into to many pies and I wouldn't be surprised if he was indeed responsible for this incident as well. I don't know how Harry is going to arrange a way to meet Itachi outside of his dreams, but I would like for them to be able to see each other in real life soon. Other than that things seem to be moving along nicely for this story and keep up the good work.
Bright1 chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
I love this story so much! OK, pairings: I would love Sasuke/Naruto and Kakashi/Iruka. Also, I would blame the massacre on Orochimaru, it just seems easier to have a ready made bad guy. : ) I can't wait for Itachi and Harry to meet up in person, even if it is only for a little while. Is Kakashi going to find out about their relationship? I'd love it if Kakashi turned into a protective big brother type figure for Harry. Oh well, I'm sure I'll love whatever you come up with. I can hardly wait for the next chapter. Excellent job.

~Dawn
as chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
GOOD STORY!

UPDATE _
Firehedgehog chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
yeah! go harry!
simalol chapter 7 . 5/7/2006
Hej! Very entertaining story... go on, please!

For the slaughter of the Uchihas, some stories are about Orochimaru to commit the murder, but since he is interested in the eyes, it is a little bit stupid to kill off everybody, since he only need good eyes, and healthy body.. If the ninja is crap, he doesnot care, because it is his spirit in the body... So he could use any ninja in the clan with good eyes, and not go through the trouble of killing off a whole clan, without anybody hearing anything (which means that there should have been a few people, to close off every entry to the Uchiha grounds... Another theory is the Akatsuki, and that is why Itachi joined them, to get to know them, but then why did they not kill him too? Maybe to make him join them, but in that case, they would not be able to trust him, because he would want to kill them... You can try something that I never saw, like another clan from some random ninja ( but with no remarkable fighting style (I mean, the style of the Hyuugas, for example, should be quite easy to make out)...) Well, I think that sums it up.

I hope to seeing more of it soon. Great job.
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