|Reviews for Around the World|
| princetongirl chapter 1 . 9/21/2007
loved it update soon
| clg chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
| Sultan Peppershaker chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Heheh... I was listening to System of a Down's "Lost in Hollywood" while I read this... if you know that song...
Hey... liked the first-person perspective. Much easier to write a story like this in first-person... I've never written one in first-person, now that I think about it. I should, some day...
Anyway, didn't recognize the song, but I'm used to that by now... it fit the story lyrically, so that's good. And... yeah. I think that was probably the best way to end it, with her just seeing him, and nothing more. Leaves the reader to fill in the gaps. I do that a lot, I've noticed.
Uhm... so yeah. Good job, but I'm sure you're used to hearing that by now.