|Reviews for Schneewittchen|
| Mangosplashies chapter 1 . 5/8/2006
dude dude dude dude dude dude dude ! ur story is awesome! its so cool! please update the second chapter soon!
| Princess Ren chapter 1 . 5/7/2006
this is a great beginning for another great story! I can't wait for the next chapter! What's next! Post soon! Keep up the good work! o
| Boredteenager chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
shit.. I forgot my password... anyway... nice story... totally... astonishing... har har... update soon!
| Tank chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
Well, I must say I'd expected Tayuya to have more of a pottymouth XD, and I didn't realize Orochikins had gender identity problems on top of pedophilia... LOL! Still, looks like a great start to a great story! Looking forward to the rest!
| xoxTeddyxox chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
please update soon this is a very good story!
| itachi-sama a.k.a cathrun chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
WAH! ANGSTY NICE! UPLOAD SOON!
| EnV chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
OMG! your such a great writer! this really moved me! update soon! i love it!
| Ms. Gentry chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
kyahh! please update soon! i hope there's some ita/saku too ne? sakura-chan wa kawaii yo! _
| Ta-dah chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
What do you mean it will be your last story? Are you out of your mind, woman?
And I so envy you your drafts - my stories are just writing themselves :]
I liked it, but damn, this heart0thing was just gross :) (liked it!).
Watched Predator much?
You write emotions great.
| Shizukana-Toki chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
I LOVE DA STORY! MAKE THEM END UP TOGETHER. AND LIVE HAPPILY EVA AFTA
| YoungSasuke chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
VERY impressive start. The simplicity of the emotions really shocked me, and the imagery was plain(yet very effective). I hope that you update soon! This is going to be a very good story.
| seyrarm-chan79 chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
OH!MY!GOD! THAT'S TOO GOOD!
| fRenZ4EveR chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
LAST STORY! NO! i love your stories! NO! Up-date soon!
| SabakuNoBrandye chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
it was good, please continue!
| XoXtessieXoX chapter 1 . 5/2/2006