|Reviews for Schneewittchen|
| i-x3-shikamaru chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
wow... definitely rated M lol it was WONDERFUL i CANNOT wait for ur next chapter!
| Jill Landicho chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
whoe. that was seriously creepy.
| Riona 11 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
wow! so wonderful! i love it! hope you update it very soon! please update the other fics too! hehe! _
| diet coffee chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
AMAZING, ASTOUNDING, TWO-THUMBS UP!
That was awesome! It was detailed extravagantly! That was so good! 10 out of 10! And that was only one chapter! Wow
Update soon Please!
Didn't I sound like a critic?
| takeBACK chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
OMG! (gaping gold fish face) This is awesome! Can't wait for your next update!
| TheDendrologist chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
ah the master of sadist writing has scrounged up another one. loved every word of it
| Tsumii chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
O.o..very dark, I loved it, please continue!
| Citree chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
whoa, gory awesomeness! update soon!
| Wings619 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
One Word: Whoa. I mean that in a good way .. I hope you continue. Please. It's so different.
| lollyberry chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
Yet another story from the wonderfully talented angel-puppeteer. But, there were spelling errors and you tend to switch your tenses quite a bit. I advise for you to get a beta. One more thing, I think that priests are alowed to marry and have children. But it all just depends what rank or whatever. And if you're catholic or not. That's what I THINK. Lol I only read it somewhere. Anyways, the story is interesting and I can't wait to see it develop more.
| sleepinbunny chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
I liked it
I'll be waiting for the next update.
| sheer chibiness chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
This story is REALLY well written. Awesome idea! I look forward to more!
| minivanx chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
LAWL update please D
| sweet-taboos chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
This is my favorite story of yours yet. Maybe because of the innocence and sin combined, is what I really like, and hardly get to see in stories. I'm addicted.
What do you mean "Last story"?
| hitherehowareyou chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
-This was REALLY good. BUT you had ALOT of spelling errors. Next time I recommend getting a beta or reading over it.
-Also, you kept changing the present tense to past tense. Or the other way around, so it got confusing. For example, this was something you wrote:
My mother was a beautiful woman. She’s intelligent and a talented fairytale book illustrator. However, she’s eerie; even I would always feel nervous at her presence.
It should be:
My mother WAS a beautiful woman. She WAS intelligent and a very talented fairytale book illustrator. However, she was always eerie; even I used to always feel nervous in her presence.
Or you should have made it all present tense. You kept switching around, and I got confused. But other than the spelling and the tenses, this story was SUPER good!
-I can't wait for the next chappiee!