Reviews for Forgiven
hearmei chapter 2 . 7/29/2006
Great idea! Lookin 4ward to it! Great story!
finder77 chapter 2 . 7/18/2006
It's kindof sad. I think you should make the end pairings NarutoSasuke and NejiSakura you know? Like they'd all break up & switch?
finder77 chapter 1 . 7/18/2006
Interesting. I think this would be neat as a story. But this is great too.
The Procrasinator chapter 2 . 7/11/2006
is nice but can you make it a more looks like you dont have that much reviews on this fic but although you dont have that much can you do for me? PLZ!



The Procrasinator chapter 1 . 7/11/2006
I like this fic although it is kinda corny...But dont take harm in that I LIKE IT ALOT! Here with this smiley thing make u better? . I givee you sasuke plushie. There you go!

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obsidian-rain chapter 2 . 7/8/2006
That's so sad that they'r enot together! They end up together right?
barisu chapter 1 . 5/28/2006
Negi-kun is not supossed to be with Naru-chan! He's supossed to be with lil' Gaara-chan! And Naru-chan goes with Sasuke-kun! Then Sakura can go have stupid Ino. also i think you should continue, even tho you have made Neji-kun cheat on lil' Gaara-chan. You still deserve a cookie. *hands you a cookie* bye
Shadow.Yami chapter 1 . 5/6/2006
*blink blink* ._. *sniffle* I'm such a sucker for stories like these.. I vote you continue!
Troublesome Aries chapter 1 . 5/4/2006
loved it

going on my favs
I'm not telling chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
If you want to write more, go ahead. I like what you've got, and if you continue updating I'll continue reading. :)
Manga-lover123 chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
There's a few mistakes here and there and the beginning seems a lil' shaky but i love the ending even though its pretty sad