|Reviews for Repeat|
| Eternal Grey chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Stare. Water. Cry. Stare. Water. Cry.
| Light Within Darkness chapter 1 . 8/13/2009
I loved this. Angsty!Sora feeling bad about Axel's death is just awesomeness.
Iloved the Joke. Laugh. Play. Cry. Cry. Cry. things you put between the paragraphs. They helped set a rhythm and made a good thing better.
| IcarusFalling23 chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
the last paragraph is by far my favorite! i love the words you use, and the repetition of single words. keep up the great writing!
| TopKat chapter 1 . 8/12/2007
ouch. that was a bit of a rollercoaster.
there's so much pain in this, but i love the format, the subject matter (of course) and the way you've written it. Sora's POV is perfect :)
| KismetDoll chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
Yeah, very confusing but I loved it. How sad...
| A Fool With Hot Chocolate chapter 1 . 11/9/2006
I really like how this was written. It was so orginal that I couldn't help but smile, and then add it to my favorites
| AngelicConquistador chapter 1 . 10/23/2006
This was very heart-breaking... but it was beautiful. Men cry too... or at least Sora does. *hugs him* I really liked this. He was looking for his missing piece...? Axel. You really made this beautiful, I'm favoriting it. I don't know what else I can say that I'm able to put into words... heheh. Great job. *Wipes tear*
| Reina-183 chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
Liked it. There were a few grammatical problems, but nothing too noticeable. Also, you spelled Paopu as "papou." Other than that, I really liked the writing style. Good job.
| prettypriestess chapter 1 . 5/13/2006
*picks up shattered heart* Just so you know, Ms Author, this is your fault.
Well written, little to no spelling errors (none that i saw anyways), & Sora being so heart-breakingly sad. Poor Sora. If that wasn't such a damn good fic, I'd tell you that you're gonna go to hell for making Sora so heart-breakingly sad, but it was a good fic, so I won't tell you that. Even though it's true.
| Connoisseur of Tea chapter 1 . 5/3/2006
It made me want to cry as well... haa~a~. So angsty, and so good... I freakin' love it!
| Elven Star4 chapter 1 . 5/2/2006
| Keirra Maxwell chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
*blinks blinks and coughs* I'm not teary eyed, I swear *sniffles* wow, amazingly well done. Great job!
| poo master chapter 1 . 5/1/2006
Whoa. Wonderful. (:
I loved the insert things
very nice. ;_;
| sutatikku chapter 1 . 4/30/2006
this was most excellent.
i loved it. wonderafull.
i like how you'd put his
actions inbetween the paragraphs,
& that roxasxaxel stuff. 33
oh boy that was awesome.