|Reviews for The Rival|
| Angel of Atonement chapter 1 . 4/7
I had to read the whole thing out loud to myself, it was that funny to me.
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
"skidding over novels of porn most hardcore" I laughed out loud at that line.
| Kurichi-chan chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
Ha! Loved it. This poem is my favorite so I love your Naruto interpretation.
| kimchi759 chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
HAHAHAHAHA. Totally deserving of obnoxious, all-caps, cyber laughter. :'))
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2013
Oh, wow, this just cracked me up xD Completely pointless but interesting and hilarious all at the same time!
| Athena's phoenix chapter 1 . 3/30/2013
Hahaha! I love this!
Nice rhyming; it's hilarious! Absolutely brilliant!
| whitealmond chapter 1 . 3/9/2013
This is so funny. I was laughing and grinning throughout. I love this so much XD
| kail420 chapter 1 . 2/14/2013
| K chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
Nice! You say you're no poet, but I disagree. This is better than anything I've ever done, and I write (more like attempt to write then angrily shred) many poems.
Thanks for a great read!
| xoxoxoxoxoxox chapter 1 . 10/31/2012
Holy shit...that was EPIC!
"for we are rivals for evermore"
Loved it, great job!
| Mistress Anko chapter 1 . 10/2/2012
That is my comment and nothing more.
| LonelyDreamer7 chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Ahaha not poetic? Madam this was poetic as fudge! XD
| Stargazer77 chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
Hahaha I loved this! Fav part:
"and he went skidding over novels of porn most hardcore"
Bahahaha! Loved it XD You did a great job!
| red squirt chapter 1 . 11/19/2011
Ha ha thatmade my day.
| riptocs chapter 1 . 9/16/2011
This really was quite creative and well written