|Reviews for Allies in Blood|
| justjoe chapter 35 . 1/14/2013
I don't know why I didn't see this earlier, but theFederation is a Mary Sue hrr
| kalani.gapido chapter 1 . 9/17/2012
Ok so you started a Buffy story but I love this series of yours at least 3 times. Every chapter and version, I work for paramount in L.A. and everytime I walk by the archives I only think of your story for the past year. What does the Minbari think in the Alpha Quadrant? How will Jon Archer handle his role as Liason between the Feddies and Earth Alliance? Unanswered questions! Lol love your updates...poor Race the colonials will efff them up! Are you going to use Stargate to tie everything up
| justjoe chapter 1 . 9/1/2012
Addendum to my previous review...
1. Replace BSG ships with Fed Fighter (DS9); combat runabout; delta flyer
2. Drop Yar and Torres plotlines and expand Worf and Data .
3. Drop Capt Adams and CO and expand Narn/Klingon role in story.
4. Resolve Janeway and Chacotay roles. Janeway should be the mission commander while Chacotay should be the ship commander. Many times it doesn't seem that way.
5. Voyager didn't need to have so many of the same faces from the original ship. The TV shows had to endure that for a reason. Fanfic does not have the same limitations.
| RLS83843 chapter 31 . 7/22/2012
Clovien, blood peers, and warships have been lost to these things far too often to ignore. The Sinhindrea were few in numbers, less than one hundred sixty billion in total, and each loss of a member of the body by the actions of lesser beings was felt
That is the number at Z'Ha'Dum?
| RLS83843 chapter 2 . 5/27/2012
Are the Goa'ould in B5 the same as the Goa'ould in the Federation timeline? You've written a damaged stargate in both universes.
| SilverReindeer chapter 36 . 4/17/2012
Hello. This is a new account of mine here at fanfiction dot net and I'm in the process of creating my old list of favorite stories from my mind. Of course your stories Those Who Stand" and this sequel to it have been excellent stories which I enjoyed reading very much - so it's no surprise that they can't be left out. Thank you for your writing and I hope that you'll get back to this series sooner or later as you've alluded to in an author's note.
| justjoe chapter 36 . 3/16/2012
An epic adventure. The layers upon layers of intrigue and action are described and executed perfectly. With so much going on it would be easy to confuse the reader and bog down the story. The work done here is to be commended. Well done.
| Borg1982 chapter 36 . 2/12/2012
A whole very good story! When will be next part of it?
| Borg1982 chapter 36 . 2/12/2012
hey AlbertG I finally ends to reed Allies In Blood and I wonder when will you swoh next part of this great story. I think from your notes that next part will have new title. When it be? I can't wait mach longer... Or if you already placed somewhere new part when I will find it?
| MUADIB1 chapter 36 . 2/12/2012
i have been reading this story for some time now( years wow!) and after relocating and having the time to finally finished it .. great story guys!kinda sad to see it end. i kept thinking all the while that it would make a great mini series or regular series of sorts. looking forward to the next sequel. again GREAT JOB! thanks! jeff
| JD chapter 36 . 12/18/2011
Excellent as always. I've truly enjoyed this and your other stories. Thank you for sharing.
| Dur'id the Druid chapter 36 . 12/6/2011
Wow, just wow. This is a great series.
| fanswell chapter 36 . 12/5/2011
Great ending, both the Centauri response with its implications and the future role for Archer. Regarding Archer I admired his personality in the Enterprise series. Will he also play a role in helping the EA adjust to the cultural changes due to the new technology ?
By the way, wrt your 29th March response to reviews, yes I would like to help. I had sent a message confirming this also. In fact I would be honoured. Please let me know how to get in touch with you.
| PK5 chapter 36 . 12/5/2011
AlbertG, just wanted to say thanks for a great story. I'm especially grateful to you for completing the story. This story was as entertaining as any book I've pulled off the shelf at a bookstore.
I look forward to the continuation of your other stories and any new ones you are inspired to pen.
| The Sithspawn chapter 36 . 12/5/2011
Awesome ending Skeet! You never fail to deliver:)
Can't wait to see what happens next, especially what Archer decides to do with Daniels little database;)
Good to see to the ruthless corporations undercut like that, the galaxy is trying to survive and they want to turn a profit. It always set my teeth on edge on the sheer shortsightedness of such a POV and belief in the universe (There's too many of those here in Egypt now.)
Anyway, can't wait for the continuation of this and the finale of ATV! So get writing I'm waiting!:):):)