|Reviews for Fate Intervenes|
| bk-1205 chapter 12 . 4/22/2012
Great story! Love the friendship between Mike and Bobby. Absolutely adore Bobby/Alex. Glad Bobby made it.
| Admiral Lily chapter 6 . 10/6/2010
DAG-NABIT! I have to be up at 3:30 for work! I should be sleeping but noooo I had to go and start another one of your stories. :D You've got me addicted. Keep up the awesome work. :D :D :D
| ChristinaAngel chapter 12 . 1/2/2010
It was interesting seeing how Bobby reacted in a crisis that had nothing to do with his job. I liked how he and Steve helped to calm everyone down, how he ignored his injuries to do so and how the survivors kept in touch afterwards, like Steve and Kelsey as well as the two kids. I liked seeing the affect of the attack like the BA relationship and how they are getting back into the swing of things. Good story!
| Ainsley Hibbs chapter 12 . 10/14/2009
Again, attention to detail and excellent writing. Just an FYI: I've read just about ALL of your stories and I'm impressed at each turn. You do excellent work!
I wasn't able to respond to your earlier email. Still getting used to fanfiction's machinations. Anyhoo, I now live in LoDo in Denver. It's reminiscent of SoHo in NYC. I miss NYC.
As always, keep up the great work and continue writing.
P.S. - I will be posting my last fanfic (LOCI, of course). I have been commissioned to write several books that will be published under my real name. LOL! I know you didn't think it was IlanaMiza? LOL! . At any rate, I'll have it up soon and then I'll be done with fanfic world. I finally found my writing style and now I'm in the process of honing it more so that the book I'm being paid to write will be on-point. Fanfic writing definitely serves its purpose. I'll let you know when it's posted.
| Medea Callous chapter 4 . 4/11/2009
Hey, how come Bobby gets to have all the adventures and Alex is always on the sidelines worrying and crying? It would be nice if she could save the day by herself once or twice.
| svgurl410 chapter 12 . 12/7/2008
I loved it! I am in awe at how you come up with all these unique plots. This was really great and I love the huge role Logan had to play. You write him so well and he always entertains me. How he was so persistent in finding Goren was great. :D
I really like Steve ... he was awesome. The Bobby/Alex relationship was sweet and the ending with the two kids ... adorable. :)
Wonderful job! :D
| Tracey Claybon chapter 12 . 8/8/2008
Well done story - you captured the atmosphere and reactions beautifully. Excellent story.
| OuroborosSnyder chapter 12 . 3/5/2008
Wow! Amazing! I enjoyed this very much...very well done!
| Fluffy-CSI chapter 12 . 10/18/2007
Hm, I'm only a year and a half late on reviewing these last few chapters, but it's better than never! Very nice ending. I'm glad Steve, Kelsey, and the kids are going to be ok...and I'm glad Goren and Eames finally got their asses into bed together! Woohoo!
| waldkind chapter 3 . 9/9/2007
that was a really nice story, thank you :)
| Zephyrs chapter 7 . 6/8/2006
Its working now...thanks I was able to finish the chapter.
| Zephyrs chapter 12 . 6/8/2006
Great stroy. I love the characters you bring to life. As hard as I know it is to bring life to the characters of CI it has to be twice as hard to bring in a character of your own making that we all can care about. Steve was a great...my 2nd favortie of yours...(Maggie of course is 1st) Would love to see him in another story...Maybe he could get into some trouble and call Bobby for help?
Love all your stories.
| Zephyrs chapter 6 . 6/7/2006
What happened to chapter 7? It wouldn't let me scroll down after Bobby collapsed...can this be fixed?
| ladybrin chapter 12 . 6/1/2006
excellent- this is one i started reading and lost track of- i am so glad i got the chance to finish it- you did a great job!
| Quicksilvermad chapter 12 . 5/25/2006
Fantastic work! *applauds* It's a rarity that one finds a fic on this site that is so well written that the reader loses herself in the plot. I was seriously worried for Goren... This is definitely going on my favorites list.