|Reviews for Outlines and Oneshots|
| arynwy chapter 36 . 6/8
Just wanted to say that I love this collection. It's like finding a chest in the attic - you open the lid and behold, there are all of these little treasures! A feast of baubles that you carefully take in hand and hold to the light to better admire. And when you turn them a certain way, you get a new facet of imagery or characterization that lights the imagination. ::smiles:: Thank you.
| J Luc Pitard chapter 36 . 5/23
Love the way her sense of adventure hasn't been dulled here. Even in her normal life, she just ups and heads Down Under... then a little more under...
One phrase to be wary of is "in all his glory" as it's been a little co-opted by the phrase "in all (one's) naked glory" to where the former is often used where the latter is more apt and so I giggled at the idea of him "in all his *ahem* glory" rather than the intended image. Perhaps "in all his glittery, holiday glory" would've given the idea without letting the reader substitute the inappropriate image. Well, inappropriate for greeting guests, at any rate.
| nekochan1994 chapter 34 . 9/12/2014
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| nekochan1994 chapter 23 . 9/12/2014
x3 So cute!
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| nekochan1994 chapter 18 . 9/12/2014
*bursts into peals of laughter*
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| nekochan1994 chapter 14 . 9/12/2014
TT-TT So beautiful!
| nekochan1994 chapter 13 . 9/12/2014
I almost kind of hope for something more graphic.
| nekochan1994 chapter 11 . 9/12/2014
Now I just want to cuddle Didymus.
| nekochan1994 chapter 10 . 9/12/2014
Not fair b/c it's misplaced.
| nekochan1994 chapter 4 . 9/12/2014
I love this but I thought Jareth's father was to blame?
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