Reviews for Middlewood
Bookfisher chapter 15 . 5/3
This is great piece of americana that happens to involve Kim and Ron, read it, but know its sadly stands incomplete just as we see an amazing Shego beginning to flex her muscles
Un83ata813 chapter 6 . 3/18
Mr YVJ, I read your bio on your account. You said that you want us to review your stories to let you know if you stink and that you can't "unstink" if we don't review your stories. Well you will definitely stink with a capital S-T-I-N-K if you don't finish Middlewood.

That is all best wishes

P.S.- I know I have left a lot of comments in the last month but that's just because I've really gotten into this story I love the setting I love the dynamic and I would really love to see it continue. You are a very good writer don't leave this story unfinished.
Un83ata813 chapter 5 . 3/3
Hello mr. Yvj, it's me again.
I wasn't trying to tell you how to write your story. I was just making suggestions because you haven't updated this story in the nearly seven years. I thought you had writer's block or something. I hope that you do continue this story because I'm really getting into it and I hope you update it soon.
Best wishes.
Un83ata813 chapter 2 . 2/16
Hello, , me again.

I was thinking, maybe instead of Kim teaching g Ron to fight, he could learn from Master Sensei and Yori, like in the show. I don't make Kim burn with jealousy.
Un83ata813 chapter 12 . 2/15
Anyway great story. I wasn't crazy about it at first because the dynamic between Kim and Ron was just so different than on the show, but it's really grown on me and I'd like to see it continue.

Best wishes
Un83ata813 chapter 13 . 2/15
And also Ron felt disappointed in himself when he he found out how ineffective he was without his guns he said "Without my guns I'm nothing". So to make up for that he should should have asked him to teach him to fight. I know I've made the same argument went twice already but I'm just trying to cover all my angles. I know that Ron will never be as good a fighter as Kim or as great an adventure as way too but still he has the potential to be more than just a gunslinger and a gambler. And he can always improve his cooking skills.
Un83ata813 chapter 14 . 2/15
I want to Ron to learn how to fight so he can be more self-reliant and just so Kim won't have to worry about being in two places at once like she did an earlier chapters. And he should read more and expand his culinary skills. And maybe become an assistant to Wade so we can learn about gadgets. I know that Kim is the the mass crime fighter in this story, but Ron and this story still isn't as skilled as he was in the show I'd like to see him improve himself so he can be of more help to Kim.
Un83ata813 chapter 1 . 2/15
You should have Kim teacher on how to fight without guns and use some of Wade's gadgets and rope Android better so that he can become the strangers partner or sidekick. Because Kim is starting to realize that she can't handle everything on her own and also it would bring them closer
Un83ata813 chapter 15 . 2/13
Why did you stop updating this story?
jon4576 chapter 14 . 7/16/2016
is there going to any update to this and the of the stories ?
Guest chapter 15 . 3/4/2016
Oh this story is just too good to have been left so long! Hope you get round to finishing it someday, its really well thought out and the characters are amazing. I like how you've kept Ron's innate goofiness and Kim's need to help people. The Stranger and Scarecrow dynamic is really interesting, as are the back stories for each character. A very well done AU.
ChillyPalmer chapter 15 . 2/13/2016
Damn, this is the best thing I've ever read. Please, please update it.
jon4576 chapter 7 . 6/28/2013
i love this story. it always brightens my mood when im feeling down. and im on the edge of my seat for the next chapter
Jboy chapter 15 . 5/31/2013
jon4576 chapter 15 . 2/11/2013
was reading this story and listening to my itunes when the song In time from the punisher came on. right at the point where felix walks into the bar where ron was. it fit the mood perfectly lol
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