|Reviews for All at Once|
| Sallyria chapter 39 . 7/26
PLEASE UPDATE !
I've been waiting patiently for years Pleeeeaaase!
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/28
"That is a point to consider, however, it only works on specific individuals – primarily those who have what muggle psychologists have termed 'Asbergers Syndrome;' such people think solely in pictures and emotions, and have to 'translate' what they're thinking into words."
I swear, you should just stop talking about anything remotely related to real-world facts. You just keep embarrassing yourself. No, we don't.
| Guest chapter 27 . 3/28
"despite common belief – they have excellent senses, even sight."
No, they don't. Dog vision is 20/75: at 20 feet distance, they see as well as humans do at 75 feet distance. That's not excellent.
| Guest chapter 26 . 3/28
"So, Mr. Potter, I think that will do it. Will you be pressing charges?"
It's not his choice. Crimes are persecuted no matter what the victim has to say about it, because the laws applies equally to everyone and being the victim of a violent crime still doesn't mean you get to decide it wasn't one.
| Guest chapter 25 . 3/28
"One of the main ones is that he's a work-a-holic – he can't stand sitting still without having something to do. He's also a bit of a neat-freak"
So his main flaws are that he's too organized and capable. You can't see me rolling my eyes right now, but I am.
| Guest chapter 17 . 3/28
"Arthur shook his head, "I have to disagree, Harry. Religious fanaticism is still rampant.""
What would he know about it? He's so ignorant of the real world he can't even pronounce electricity correctly.
| Guest chapter 5 . 3/28
"hydrochloric acid and sugar"
Adding sugar to hydrochloric acid does nothing, so good job trying to sound smart and achieving the opposite.
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/27
"All at once" was an interesting idea. "Going through all the stations of canon at once, on fast forward" isn't. With that Diagon Alley visit, you pretty much just lost any interest in this story I ever had.
| Guest chapter 4 . 2/12
The Weaslys use their money to pay medical bills...Except they don't because healthcare is free in the UK (thanks to the NHS), really poking at cultural differences here! Anyway, really love the fic so far! Great writing!
| T1962 chapter 39 . 2/1
Hello, I am sitting in front of my laptop screen in the beginning of 2023. I have read all 39 of The available chapters of All At Once. I can only hope that your muse bunnies jump into the chapter files so that I may be able to read ever unfolding adventures of Harry and the others. I am enchanted.
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/13/2022
It's weird that Harry trusted Remus immediately. If I were him, I would be skeptical at Remus. And I hate Remus' character here, he's like Albus' lap dog. And Harry is totally not smart if he trusts someone who abandoned him since birth.
| Leapyearbaby29 chapter 12 . 9/5/2022
Harry just discovered he can talk to snakes! Lol. :)
| Leapyearbaby29 chapter 11 . 9/5/2022
How was Sirius’s prisoner number ironic? And I forgot Harry still goes to school.
| Leapyearbaby29 chapter 10 . 9/5/2022
Sirius is free!
| Leapyearbaby29 chapter 9 . 9/5/2022
Well damn! I can’t wait for Sirius to get free! :)