Reviews for All at Once |
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![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE ! I've been waiting patiently for years Pleeeeaaase! |
![]() ![]() "That is a point to consider, however, it only works on specific individuals – primarily those who have what muggle psychologists have termed 'Asbergers Syndrome;' such people think solely in pictures and emotions, and have to 'translate' what they're thinking into words." I swear, you should just stop talking about anything remotely related to real-world facts. You just keep embarrassing yourself. No, we don't. |
![]() ![]() "despite common belief – they have excellent senses, even sight." No, they don't. Dog vision is 20/75: at 20 feet distance, they see as well as humans do at 75 feet distance. That's not excellent. |
![]() ![]() "So, Mr. Potter, I think that will do it. Will you be pressing charges?" It's not his choice. Crimes are persecuted no matter what the victim has to say about it, because the laws applies equally to everyone and being the victim of a violent crime still doesn't mean you get to decide it wasn't one. |
![]() ![]() "One of the main ones is that he's a work-a-holic – he can't stand sitting still without having something to do. He's also a bit of a neat-freak" So his main flaws are that he's too organized and capable. You can't see me rolling my eyes right now, but I am. |
![]() ![]() "Arthur shook his head, "I have to disagree, Harry. Religious fanaticism is still rampant."" What would he know about it? He's so ignorant of the real world he can't even pronounce electricity correctly. |
![]() ![]() "hydrochloric acid and sugar" Adding sugar to hydrochloric acid does nothing, so good job trying to sound smart and achieving the opposite. |
![]() ![]() "All at once" was an interesting idea. "Going through all the stations of canon at once, on fast forward" isn't. With that Diagon Alley visit, you pretty much just lost any interest in this story I ever had. |
![]() ![]() The Weaslys use their money to pay medical bills...Except they don't because healthcare is free in the UK (thanks to the NHS), really poking at cultural differences here! Anyway, really love the fic so far! Great writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, I am sitting in front of my laptop screen in the beginning of 2023. I have read all 39 of The available chapters of All At Once. I can only hope that your muse bunnies jump into the chapter files so that I may be able to read ever unfolding adventures of Harry and the others. I am enchanted. |
![]() ![]() It's weird that Harry trusted Remus immediately. If I were him, I would be skeptical at Remus. And I hate Remus' character here, he's like Albus' lap dog. And Harry is totally not smart if he trusts someone who abandoned him since birth. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Harry just discovered he can talk to snakes! Lol. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() How was Sirius’s prisoner number ironic? And I forgot Harry still goes to school. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sirius is free! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well damn! I can’t wait for Sirius to get free! :) |