Reviews for All at Once
stacygrrl2002 chapter 35 . 5/6
Could have given a couple years time served followed by. Seven years of inconvenience though. Bet dudders blows it big time. Sneaky Lucius. Gets the best of both worlds
stacygrrl2002 chapter 34 . 5/6
Nice jab Harry. Can't believe the sheep were letting it go on and the goon squad didn't react.. never expected Lisa
stacygrrl2002 chapter 33 . 5/6
Ambitious, and I don't think it's workable to expose magic and integrate the two societies. Too many differences, in just living.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 32 . 5/6
Very nicely scripted. The plots and plans are coming together, and life moves on. Good luck Sirius! Hmm, Jenn and Remus could bfe a good match
stacygrrl2002 chapter 31 . 5/6
Before I start this chapter...I'm really surprised Dumbles hasn't made an appearance to discover what happened in the graveyard. His showing up at the funeral was a big surprise. Tonks and Snape may have given some info but no details. Why no scenes with Snape and Moldyshorts, he is the go to potion guide. Now to the chapter... see, Ron can overfill a tea spoon. Bet Barty and Lucius filled the room with smoke during that discussion. Nicely woven.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 30 . 5/6
The exact ring I do desperately need. Gotta have it now! That's one way to eliminate followers. I'm surprised that a pure blood supremacist would have a book that mentioned psychology much less knew what it meant. They are that far living in our past
stacygrrl2002 chapter 29 . 5/6
I think I remember reading Sirius had a low level case of pneumonia that was treated upon his release from Azkaban. Not the purple dinosaur! Geneva convention! Cruel and unusual! Wonderful hallucination scene. Would be long term torture for Moldyshorts. Heavy metal band? Henry the eighth? Image of Harry with his wand out?
stacygrrl2002 chapter 28 . 5/6
I thought Harry would know what a portkey felt like in use. Same graveyard scene, but handled a bit differently. Not sure how he got away. A lot of inept, out of shape, can't think wizards I reckon, although Barty did catch him earlier. Maybe he got out of line of sight just enough so they couldn't apparate and encircle him. TThe anti apparition shields were localized around the cemetary
stacygrrl2002 chapter 27 . 5/6
I imagine Ginny as one of the points Moldyshorts and Bella were discussing in that scene earlier as well as Harry. Sounds like you've planned on using a different ritual to rebody ole Moldyshorts. Not sure if Harry will see a foreign hummingbird as noticeable as that as being worth the effort.i see harry and Amelia as a nice pleasant amicable first effort, but not lasting.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 26 . 5/6
Boys and their toys. That's good work Bella. Unfortunately. Somebody needs to step on Rita, several times, or any someone's. Get 'er Andi. Throw away the keys on dudders
stacygrrl2002 chapter 25 . 5/5
No, Harry did not ask Dumbles for his placement reasons, but Dumbles was supposed to tell him all pertinent info, and Dumbles had to save face and maintain his only Dumbles knows the wording of the lousy prophecy, still 17 years after it was made. Ron again displays his bigoted ignorance, and poor ole mistreated different never did anything wrong.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 24 . 5/5
Snow? And a slow body shop? Better drivers in the UK than the states! Great fight scene. Stupid but great. With a name like Nigel, he has to be included. And so the war council meets and the idiot child is gonna match wits with Moldyshorts
stacygrrl2002 chapter 23 . 5/5
I can see the FDA approving just so many potion ingredients. And the magical creatures! Dragon preserves gonna get a big tourist boost. Hey Chad, tell us something we don't know except WE read all the books or saw the movies. Beating Harry is an ego thing also. Dream a little dream of me.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 22 . 5/5
Ahhhh, I liked cauldron. Not sure if hrs gonna be able to work this out. Secrecy is international. Even if countries outside of Europe and Dumbles little playground operate differently. Wizard market is pretty small comparatively. Substituted electricity and gasoline and even solar gonna fight them big-time
stacygrrl2002 chapter 21 . 5/5
Like Dumbles is really gonna help. Snape was probably better. Wonder what ole Moldyshorts has up his sleeve
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